This is a really good story. I love all the OCs. I hope you will come back someday in the future. I can't wait to see what Ness's reaction to having Daniel show up would be.

Hnnnnng

I just found this story and fell in love with it! D:

Assassins creed two takes place mostly in 1479 in the first part

OH MY GOOOOOOD! MORE chapter pleaaaaaaaase? D:

It's just awsome! OU YEAH!

What I particularly like about this fiction, is the dog and Daniel.

for some reason they make all the difference for me. I love dogs, and a friend to back up the time-traveler story is a plus. I love it.

As such, I look forward to updates!

It's so good! I need more soon :) :) :)

Hope you had a nice vacation!

DanielxLeonardo? Hm... that might work.

I'm sorry to inform you the story has some... Plot-holes, maybe?

I mean, first she's only wearing a tank top, then she mysteriously has her kevlar vest and now she "pulls her sleeve"? A tank top with sleeves?

Aside from that, it's a good story, and it's interesting to see someone inserted into AC which doesn't try to get into the Brotherhood, lacking a better term.

Hooray for plot device! :D

...My name means 'Angel of Light' or 'Light of the Angel'(depending on what sort of translation you are using' with the respectable '-san' suffix put at the end of the name...Just in case ya wanted to know...ANYWAY! If memory serves me right, then Daniel is gay, yes?...Is Leonardo gay? Are they gonna end up as a gay coupling? TEEEEEEEEEELL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! xD I wonder how the reunion between Vanessa and Daniel will go? UPDATE!

You just have like Leonardo in these AC stories. And the plot twist is going to be fun to see play out. And really, like Vanessa would fall for Ezio's normal tricks, he just doesn't know what he has on hand now does he. Also, loved the chapter and story.

You're alive! What a pleasant surprise! Nice chapter, too. I have a feeling Vanessa's mercenaries will suffer a little with the training, and I'm sure it'll be tremendous fun to read. I'm glad Daniel and Leonardo found each other (the bit when he asked if Daniel and Vanessa where married was hilarious) and Daniel will be joining the fun in Monteriggioni (say it with me: monte - ri - ggio - ni).

I'm generally uncomfortable with making request from an author because I feel like I'll mess with the story and I don't want to force anything on them. That said, if you get Ezio to say "Bene" once in the next chapter, I'll be a happy woman. :)

I'll look forward to the next chapter!

Tee hee hee. HikarinoTenshi-san means in Japanese "Ms. Angel of Light" just so you know. I'm a total otaku (fanatic) of anything and everything Japanese, including their language.

I know right, don't you hate does stupid, vapid fangirls that would swoon if their favorite character so much as smile at them? "Makes me want to puke my guts out," to quote a certain crazy Harlequin from the Final Fantasy series...

And of course Ezio will try to bed her, I just wish him good luck on that. Being a modern woman I'm sure she has her ways of keeping him away, hopefully nothing as drastic as putting a gun to his head, but you never know... *wink wink, nudge nudge*

Sounds like a fun fanfic to read! I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story!

I must say that this story is getting very interesting...even though I should read more and then comment, but I couldn't help but stop and comment on how amazing this is. It just seems so real when I read the story and that always entices me to read more. I tend to imagine and put out daydreams in front of me while I read the story, and the way you described everything made me feel like I was actually in Florence. I can't wait for the next chapter update. Please continue writing as you are a very well-spoken(written) writer. :)

Most fascinating. A policewoman traveling through time and space to end up in the Assassin's Creed-verse? My my, the implications and possibilities are near endless. And she's an Aboriginal also? Well well.

This story and you show much promise. Please do continue. I await your next chapter with baited breath.