The description made me laugh, and it's a really good chapter. Can't wait to read more.

You could do with putting divisions between different viewpoints, sometimes you're jumping between and it gets a bit confusing.

Enjoying the McKono love though :D

Hahaha love Danny being such a Yenta and being pleased with himself when he figures out why Steve's being such an ass. And of course Kono being a badass and laying him out.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA love Kono :D calling Steve a girl hehehehehe love her.

A little rushed but other than that - great story! I really enjoyed reading it

Thank you. I do love Steve/Kono stories.

The punch was a classic. And the ending absolutely romantic.

Cute, especially the end and all the emotions Steve went through! :D

Super cute! Loved steves protectivness

haha definitely lots of practices, really like the fanfic and the inner monologues of both kono and mcgarett. Really good !

Oh, the plot thickens. Please continue this, I want to know how it goes.

LOVED this! I loved how the protective side of Steve came out and helped him realize his love for Kono that much faster. SO cute! keep up the great work; I would love to see more from you soon! ;)

I loved it! Can't wait for your next story! Thanks so much for posting.

another great chapter ;) and a really great ending to the story ;) cant wait to see whatcha write for us next

Awwww...loved the ending :-) Sweet and passionate kisses between Steve and Kono. Thank you for posting up the chapters so quickly :-)

That was an extremely cute ending.

WRITE MORE STORIES:)

Happy Monday!