Hells yeah. Do the world a favor and write more fanfictions.

I really liked the almost poetic way you wrote this. Very interesting, pretty style.

He-he! I love how this story is just awesome! So descriptive too.

Simply amazing! I loved it! Very cute, and I liked how you described the story. :D

omg, this was sooooo good! What way for a first kiss. Oh, Maka, so silly. Simply lovely.

This was an interesting take on a SoMa first kiss. I've read far and few 'kiss-to-disguise' scenes, much less one that covers the situation quite so cleanly. Not may writers seem to think of hiding the blood stained wounds or such. And you kept them in character extememly well; I never quite thought that Maka would be the type to tun back around and kiss simply fo pleasure if they're both bleeding and in danger. Her obliviousness was well kept. Great story!

yeah you missed something alright silly girl
he told you how he wants his next kiss to be WITH YOU!
i love your writing reading all your stories right now

I favorited this story years ago, but I was rereading it recently and thought that what you did was genius! I love how you began and ended the story to explain exactly what the title says. Great job. Very creative.

I LOVED that. Something a bit more serious, yet still in character. It fit Maka and Soul perfectly. I hope you continue to write, because you are very talented. Thunder

Awwwww! I really liked it!

cool one-shot, loved it.

nice~

i liked it [: very well written

thanks for writing this (:

(Sorry im not logged in!) It was very good! I love all of your stories, my friend. And I mean ALL of them! Wonderful plot and the ending was wonderfully poetic! 500/10!

I know this probably makes me sound at least relatively twisted, but it was actually somewhat amusing. And to think that Maka would be the one to think of that! I really like it!

I loved it! It was dark, yet beautiful at the same time. :)