Sad...and hypocritical. But I like that there's something deeper.
Great work.

This is beautiful! Go Bubblegum! BTW, I'm a MarcyXFinn fan and I still loved this.

I feel like...
I feel like that was a great implacation of MARCELINEXFINN I also like the way the letter explained the story with needing to have a prequeal.
I feel like...
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I feel like you are an amazing writer and should continue on writing

I sometimes feel this horrible,excruciating pain inside of it is too much to handle and I can't take it anymore,when I read things like this

heavy i liked it
Draco122

Awww so sad ):

Something about Bubblegum saying fuck just rubs me the wrong way.

...so sad...

so touching...

much better then my fanfics...

Someday, someday there will be a war between FXPB and FXM.

I don't really know what it is about this fic, but this fic seems to portray PB as OOC a bit dont ya think?

thats soooooo sad

This fic is so powerful. Even as I re read it right now I felt tears forming at the corners of my eyes.

It's really sad when someone you like likes someone else and I think you captured those feelings perfectly.

Wow, that's certainly a darker side of Princess Bubblegum. I liked this, it felt like you really jam packed emotion inside of it. Personally, I like Finn & Marceline, so it wasn't really sad for me to read that part. I loved the ending, when you write:

I feel like you took a big piece of my heart with you…

Keep it.

I don't want it anymore…

That was deep XD A very good job! :D

This is very dramatic, emotional, and I love it. I like to think of Finn basing his life around Marceline, but it would be sad to see PB sad, but oh well, life happens.

poor PB

she deserve to stay with finn

nice story...