What the he'll ever happened to this story and you?

It's been so.. so long ... but I always come back here. Thanks, I love this...

Well crap, although I think this is an amazing story, is crap that in most of the chapters you were like “I don’t plan to rush this story, this story is my baby, I refuse to rush Bella and Alice’s relationship” and then you dragged it for 24 chapters, just so then you abandoned you “baby”, what a bummer, would have been better if instead of dragging it too much, you managed to at lest let them get together in those 24 chapters, instead of dragging stuff so much just so you wouldn’t even finish, didn’t even get to see Alice and Bella together or admit their feelings, you wrote 24 chapters and Bella is still described as this oblivious character who still wonders what those “shocks” are when she touches Alice, way too slow, beyond reality.

I know you probably won't update any time soon, but please, if you read this, pease update again.

i wish this story would be updated

From time to time I always return to this story, it is one of my favorites for a long time. I hope you can continue, because you have an ability for words that is amazing. You caught me completely, and you make me remember my great love for Alice & Bella, please come back, this must be over, I send you a big hug! :D

I just start with I love the writing style and attention to the characters in this fic.
however, I am sad that in 24 chapters we didn't get a whole lot on progress on the bellice part.
definitely a great fic that stopped before the meat of it, worth a read now and again with a favorite and follow

hey, thank you for this awesome story. I hope that one day you come back and finish this, but if not then thank you for what you've given us

I really can't understand this story you can't tell me we have to wait for 24 chapters for them to get together its so boring

So I'm assuming 6 years later that this will never be finished.. and right when you were getting to the good part (Bellice) too. How unfortunate. If you ever continue writing again I'm sure there's still people that would read this, myself definitely included

Forgive me, but this could have been a really good story.. I love the playing in the mud & the lightning scenes, so touching. However the chapters didn’t need to be so long & repetitious. They never even kissed?

Hello. Please update soon. This story is great, I can't wait to see how it ends.

I'm really enjoying this. Write more soon!

Absolutely AMAZING STORY! please update!

Wonderful story.