Perhaps writing isn't for you if you demand positive reviews as payment to even consider continuing a story. It's childish and unethical. I hope you've grown out of that since this story was first posted.

Epic fic, well written and relatable. my only slight complaint is that it focuses a little too much on Keitaro, Kitsune and Naru, and not enough on the rest of the harem Haruka. In particular I would have liked to have seen more interaction between Motoko and Keitaro while she gradually starts to accept his presence. That incident with Naru and the water was never really fleshed out too.

I find it satisfying that Kentaro got what he deserves and that Naru, Keitaro, Kitsune managed to clear things up and it looks like Shinobu is maturing. Haruka has found her love. Though I find it saddening that Motoko is only leaving letter saying that they might never cross paths again.

But in the end... its a good ending to a good story.

I don't like how Keitaro is having second thoughts about Kitsune. Yes he learned, a glimpse, of Kitsune's interesting past, but it was he who said he wanted to learn more about Kitsune, the good, bad and ugly.

And Kentaro is a bigger asshole than before. Now that I've read that he tried to kill Keitaro what I thought was three times. And this time was gonna be right then and there.

Revelations are powerful. And can be hurtful. While I skimmed a lot of this story upon first reading it, I clearly remember reading about Kitsune's past in this chapter and in the last.

I like how Keitaro talks about his feelings in this. It's like he's not allowed to do that in the canon story. And Not too many fics have a alternate Keitaro.

When I first read this chapter... it answered far too many questions about Naru.

letters—but if I do get into Tokyo U, and you don't, you'll be the one to leave Hinata Inn—and all of Japan, actually."

Naru... He doesn't have to do shit. She's only pissed because she failed in her mission to expose
Keitaro's 'villainy'

I've always that that asshole Kentaro was the "just kinda there" kinda character.

I believe in my heart that this one of my two favorite chapters in the story. Awesome romantic job.

Keep up the good work with Kitsune Keitaro l. Don't let anything get in your way that wasn't already there.

I'll never understand Nationalists. Ultranationalism especially is scary.

Why is it that Kitsune never asks Naru about her intentions regarding Keitaro in this story? Like she does every other fic? Then again this is more real life.

Emotionally attached. Sorry.
She was angry at him for forgetting their date and then forgives him. Puts her initial plans in jeopardy.

Looks like Kitsune is becoming emotionally to Keitaro.