THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY! I would really like more of this story. I would especially love Dudley's reaction to Harry having magic. I especially enjoyed the slow realization Dudley had regarding Harry's food intake. Thank you for writing this story. -S

Nice. Would love to read more.
You're a great writer.

A delightful read.

Cute

I do hope you'll continue this, it was a really good start

Love it so far and hope u will start updating it again soon

Interesting.
I believe I can see where this is going, but I hope to see where you take it.

That was a lovely story. Just the little changes make such a difference.

Nice one! Thanks.

Credible development!

awww!
this was so sweet!

Aw this story is so sweet! I loved how you kept Dudley in character but there was enough shift in events that it changed the dynamic between him and Harry. I wish that you'd explore this relationship when they're older. Great read!

Aww. I could so imagine that happening. The little shifts you created were great. And I adore the way you used the word 'secret' because really, no one would expect them to have any sort of brotherly relationship if they were an outsider. It's just a Dudley's way of caring thing, and I loved the way it was portrayed on the whole. Thanks for sharing!

I really Really like this story, I hope you add more to it.

I am so in love with this concept, it makes an amazing AU
All the possibilities
Possibly Harry in a different house
Dudley become friends with, at least acquaintances with the twins.
My heart