| Reviews for A Little Dessert |
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KC Evans chapter 4 . 5/1 So, first off, I think Kagome had a point about being annoyed that Inuyasha just suddenly left her without saying another word. That little smiley face on the bill does not make up for being a wuss (but I’m tickled by the idea that he’d do that). I mean, I understand he got a little thrown off balance at her questions but come on, running away is not the answer! Kagome should have given him a harder time so he won’t do it again. With that said, I’m so happy they finally got to share their feelings and go out on a proper date. It was really cute that Inuyasha was so protective over Kagome when she got burned (and who doesn’t sympathize with those days when it just doesn’t pay to get out of bed?) and wanted to share dessert with her. Also, I’d totally thank and then murder Hojo too. I love it that he wasn't the usual oblivious rival for Kagome’s affections but actually helped out. I also just realized how you titled the chapters. Brilliant. It was really a great story with wonderful interactions and situations that made me laugh and snicker and aww. I was totally in the mood for a rom/com and this fit the bill so very satisfactorily. Thanks for sharing it! |
KC Evans chapter 3 . 5/1 Ahahaha, I love the nickname Kagome’s friends came up for Inuyasha. So when I read about the reservations, at first I thought “This is it! Inuyasha wanted Kagome’s attention all to himself so he reserved every single table in her section so she wouldn’t be running around and they can talk and fall in love because there’s only one more chapter!” Clearly I was wrong but this was so much better since we were introduced to even more familiar characters and crazier situations. I loved all the interactions and Inuyasha’s toothy grin because he’s tipsy and robot Sesshomaru. You showed a brief but sweet side of Shippo and I thought Hojo being a master flirty bartender when working was a great little touch to make the characters more real. I can’t wait to read the conclusion! |
KC Evans chapter 2 . 5/1 Oh my goodness, that was hilariously unexpected. Two more dates, two more women screaming and walking out on Inuyasha, and maybe some positive movement in the right direction for our two lovebirds to finally get together. Again, the small but interesting details of working in food service was a nice background to the story, which helped enrich the scene and even the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome. I also had to laugh at Yura’s new name whenever she was mentioned by Kagome. On to the next chapter! |
KC Evans chapter 1 . 5/1 Love the start to this and looking forward to how it’s going to go. I appreciate how you mention how hard it is to work in the food industry and how we should all be a little nicer to the people there. I could feel how awkward Kagome felt overhearing Inuyasha’s and Kikyo’s strained conversation and the confusion of Inuyasha’s lukewarm and cool behavior. I’m eager to read how their relationship is going to proceed, hee! |
ReadingThrill chapter 3 . 1/23 I think it's safe to say you are my favourite writer on this website, you never fail to please! Your writing is.. chef kiss- I mean, I'm always so bedazzled by a certain story, then I look up the name and- oof you deliver every time! Thank you for sharing your writing with us! This story is literally so cute, idek what to comment haha |
lover-of-the-light117 chapter 4 . 1/7/2018 This was so much fun to read- the interactions between the two were so sweet with the usual spice that is an annoyed Kagome and an annoying Inuyasha haha. Thanks! |
Typicalyssa chapter 4 . 12/30/2017 That was refreshing and sweet! I could actually imagine Barrels and everyone in it. I like the development of the story, it wasn't rushed, it wasn't predictable and conversations were witty. Thanks for the story! |
koreantrash101 chapter 1 . 9/15/2017 Cuuuutte, I really enjoyed that. Sass levels were so high, it was great! |
HimariHana chapter 4 . 8/30/2017 This was super cute. I legit giggled like a school girl on some parts. Excellent story! |
Wfest chapter 4 . 6/23/2017 A very amusing, well written story. I enjoyed the humor in it very much. |
Godschildtweety chapter 4 . 10/28/2016 Really cute |
The sniffanator chapter 4 . 7/19/2015 HAH! I LOVED THIS! DEFINITELY GOING TO FAVORITES! PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
Fujioka Ran-Chan chapter 3 . 6/8/2015 Someone's rich, holy crap. |
chellybot chapter 4 . 6/5/2015 This was a very nice short story. I liked how realistic you made the restaurant seem! |
4 ever inuyasha and kagome chapter 1 . 4/11/2015 This was soooooo good cant wait to read more |