Please tell me there is going to be more? This is a very great story. I love all the variations you have so far. I love that we see both of Shepard's parents and a little brother...great family dynamic.

Just wanted to say i love this story and I hope it will be continued. This is one of the best Femshep/Ashley stories I have read. There need to be more tho :( Also the below link is a picture of what I imagine your shepard looks like with all the muscle definition she would have due to her extreme weight training.

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This chapter was well written. Your Shepard is amazingly funny and so is Ashley. Great work!

I love your Shepard so much included with this being a FemshepxAshely fabric is a plus!

Look I love your story I just lost interest as soon as you made Miranda kiss shepard and Ashley with femsheps brother. I thought it was better when it was just Ashley and Femshep because every relationship has its flaws. You pulled this off perfectly but then you ruined it. In my opinion. Sorry if I've offended I just wanted to share my pov.

Please tell me your just on hiadas or something like writers block or something and this is only the temporary end and you are trying to make more chapters because I am loving this story and there is still so much to be told considering where it is in the game. I really really like it and hope that you finish it.

Well this chapter (16) brought back some bad memories, I was reunited with my girlfriend after four years of forced separation (She had to move and I couldn't go with her) We fought for hours and ended it that night. I found out the night after that she'd already started seeing someone so I started dating her sister. Me and her sister are engaged now and my ex is unmarried and miserable ) Great story so far!

Ah balls garrus left well that's a twist right there. Good job on the escape between Ashley and garrus. Loved this chapter.

Nice chapter. If only the reasons for this reach and flexibility test were better...

wow, I was beginning to think you quit on the story or something.

just a few things... several times throughout the chapter, i guess u missed it, but there are a multitude of instances where you left the first letter off of words other than that great chapter and hope the next one won't take as long.

How is it that I get 1 review of my ME story and u get loads? I don't see the difference between our stories apart from urs is romance with femshep and ashley and mine is femshep and Kaidan and each chapter u have is longer than 5 pages

Wow! Awesome chapter as usual. Didn't see Kallen switching back to Ash, but there wasn't any reason not to. I hope Miranda doesn't completely fall apart. Keep it up.

Great chapter that part were you compared victus to Kaiden was great. Really liked how Ashley and Shepard are back together. Great chapter can't wait for the next.

well so far so good

Missed this story but bigger things came up so I understand. Good luck on getting published. And did you hear that they are making a new mass effect trilogy, but without Shepard?