Short, but very good. I see potential for expansion, but it would be rather hard to fit into Canon.
As for the story itself, I think you did an excellent job of portraying Seras' inner struggle. She didn't want to become a monster, especially given her instinct to protect.

Wow, this was an excellent piece. I was a little surprised to see Anderson being so gentle with Seras, given what she is, but you characterized them both excellently, and this was a lovely conversation.

This Anderson was so...different. Not a crazy man with Hippocratic sayings and all but a true 'priest' with a 'little' twist in his profession. I loved the way you showed the mature, fatherly and humane side of him. You actually showed his pain by the means of his spectacles! I loved it!.. You should really write a story on this franchise with him in it and GOOD LORD! That adaptation of the accent was amazing! Keep up the good work!

This is just so sweet :D i love it

That was adorable. Still expected Double A to reach out and pop her head off at any moment, but I don't think I can really be blamed for that.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love this so much! It is canon as far as I am concerned. So, so lovely! Your Anderson is just awesome, just exactly as I imagine him to be, and Seras as down-trodden and filled with potential. So, so awesome. So much love for you. 3

Awesome story my friend! I could just hear Anderson's accent in my head, you have it down well!

Cute and a bit funny. You really have Seras in your fingers when you write. More fleshed out than she ever was in canon, but in a way that we really can believe that it would have happened. I would very much like to see more such Seras moments from you, both in longer stories, and in these entertaining one-shots.

Great work.

Wondrful :)

This was great. I loved every bit. Especially the 'duckling with a sledgehammer' part. Very cute and very in character, I thought. :D