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Whoa. Just whoa. This sent shivers down my spine. This was an absolute masterpiece. A little more romance would've been better (since I'm kinda romance loving guy, lol), but this was/is amazing. Thanks for this amazing treat Author-San. Lots of love.

Not bad.

btw, nami left before mihawk vs zoro so she didn't see the fight

Fuck you I fuckin CRIED. I LITERALLY HAD TO GET MY TISSUE BOX. I really wished you continued the aftermath. Like a better look into have Luffy and Nami's relationship ended up. Otherwise this fic was really really good.

I just fucking cried, wtf :D

I actually though nami would die we'll...her personality would

Utterly beautiful, I nearly cried at all the events that had been happening, I laughed very hard with the poor Sanji been depressed (oh how evil I feel) and I really really love the way you portrayed all of this. The drama, the insults directed to each of them so finely (adjusted to their background) the way Luffy has been in character and also no in character (kind of strange and gorgeous) the way Zoro helped Sanji, Robin...Ah! I don't know what to say anymore...I think I could go on and on all night If I continue now and it is 2:50 am in my country and I really have to sleep but this was sooooo interesting that I couldn't stop. Thank very much for creating such a master piece.

Nice story! Too bad the old lady didn't get beaten up

Oh the angst... but I like it! :) Honestly I love the idea, at first I thought the old woman gave her some kind of truth serum, but it turned out to be a 'be really nasty' potion. :) We all know Nami can be a little rude sometimes, but this is definitely over the top.

＊Sob Sob＊what a nice story ! And this has the Suuuuppppppeeerrrrrr best ending ever to go with story ! LuNa Forever

This was a pretty dark story but it was really well written and I loved the ending!

Kind of a quick finish. Not a lot of closure. But, all-in-all, good story. Lot of drama. :)

poor luffy, poor robin

That's an ending! Give a standing ovation boys! (Said boys clap for about 5 minutes) Alright, that enough! Glory Hounds...This was a terrific story! You should write more often!