The end was so ooc tht I cracked up xD id love to see the day shiro-chan is happy B]

Really enjoyed it. Not THAT much HitsugayaXMomo considering what other people publish, but I'm glad for that: that kind of stuff usually gets in the way of the plot.

Ah, where to begin, so many funny parts to mention and so little space. If only you had published it in multiple chapters...

But well done, and keep up the good work.

YAY! Merry Christmas, Shiro-chan!

ADORABLE! Thank you so much for writing this! And I'm not even a HitsuHina fan... who is the next victim?

Well done, and a very appropriate Christmas-in-Soul-Society tale. Dialogue is most definitely your strength, and it came through excellently here.

My one and only complaint technically would be lack of detail. Seeing Captain Hitsugaya roll his eyes after a dry comment instead of just dialog would help the flow a bit better, and better illustrate the dialogue.

Wondering if you've any more one-shot (or multi-part) stories in the Bleach universe to tell,

-s/t

Kyaaaaaa~! I love this! I just finished reading A Christmas Carol novel and this really follows the plot of the novel with, of course, the Bleach twists. I'm rather impressed with your eye to detail of the events, since you included many notable events in this fan fiction.

You should write the next about the next "Scrooge!" -I'll be looking forward to reading it~!

This was great! There are so many good moments I cant recount them all. I loved the discussion about possible punishments for the prank.

I could not stop laughing for almost an hour when I read this story, and I only did when I got to the end, and I think I choked up a little. This was hilarious and saddening and then joyous. Just like the original story, only better. Enough twist and turns to throw off poor Shiro-chan (and us readers!)

Casting was brilliant, I can see Rangiku did her homework when it came to the novel. And I loved the inclusion of Sojiro Kusaka in the story, since I've always enjoyed the Bleach movies and consider them good as canon. Its a pity, by contrast, that Hyouinmaru didn't make an appearance manifested, though I did enjoy his 'white christmas' performance.

And I loved the omake-worthy scene at the end with the three spirits crossing his name off a list and preparing to go after the next poor sod. Oh the possibilities.