This was my first trip into the HDM FanFic Section, and I have spent a long day, reading, reviewing, and retaining a lot of good, bad, and ugly FanFic in this section. I must say, though, this is one of the better FanFics, much better. Good work and writing so far.

There were a few grammatical and syntactical errors here and there, but it was never so much that it detracted from the flow of the story.

I enjoy your concise and clear writing style. It gets the point across, without to much overhang.

Keep up the good work.

awwwwwww! awwwww! very sweet, a lovely little story :)

That was SO cute! I really liked it.

Hehe, I was smiling like an idiot the whole time I was reading this. :3 It's so cute! .;

OMG this is the best fic like EVER! I love it! Write more!

I loved it! It was a really imaginative way of finding them a way to communicate, and in all honesty it nearly made me cry! Excellent :)

Becca x

not bad at all.

slightly illogical, but nevertheless cute.

waffy...

I love waff.