This is beautifully written! The emotional side, fits in with the time and everything. It, is such a touching choice, that you picked, "Fix You", it is such a moving song...with this chapter, it, is truly heartwarming, in a peculiar way.

HERONSTAIRS!

IS this a HeronStairs love story?

I should have guessed this wold turn into Jem and Will being in love with one another. I love this kind of material. I very much enjoy it so far. The end of this chapter got me emotional. Yet again poor Jem with that damn demon with the poison in his system. The title makes me think that either Jem or Will will fall in love with Tessa, I king of hope not. I love the idea of Jem and Will being together damn what the clave think.

Good story!

you did a pretty good job,but that is not realy like their personality. it is some thing they would do thought."Tessa," Jem said. "Take me, Tessa." Tessa kissed him once more and he released her hands looked down at the one remaining layer she had on. He was seized with a mad passion and he grabbed her panties and jerked them down so hard that they ripped in his hands." he would never do this or talk to her like this.

I loved this
This story confused me a lot
I don't know why but I expected the final to be more romantic ( I'm not judging, I loved the final )
This was abolutely incredible
Love You

This is amazing! So HAWT! :)

I was reading through this and thinking, there are so many long chapters in this and it's about jem and Tessa, so why did it get so little reviews? Then I got to the part where jem kisses will and I'm like oh...that's why lol

Between yesterday and today, I read this entire story. It was very very good, if only a tad unrealistic with minimal on the clockwork creatures. However, I throughly enjoyed it. I loved Will and Jem's relationship, they had a strong sort of love, and there was just enough action. I really liked Gabriel, and Tessa was pretty spot on. I may have cried a little while reading this. :)

Ummm did you make will and Jem gay and in love with eachother? I'm confused... I thought it said that will liked Tessa and other girls and then he kisses Jem...

I like it when Will is removing the flower petals he says, "I'm taking its virtue, have some respect." Clever!

Very good story but there's two things I've noticed, first: Henry is very out of character, two: you've written Tessa to seem like and idiotic girl. But other than those two things I really like this story

I have just finished reading your story and oh god, that was amazing.

Surely the best one I've ever read about Infernal Devices.

I love Will and Jem and I found it so sad whem Will swore to another parabatai -possibly the saddest thing that happened, it made me cry.

Congratulations :)

OMG that was amazing. I didn't like when it finished cause I just want to read more and more and more and more of your story! Good job :)