Hey! I'd like to see more of this story :) It's got good grammar and no spelling errors that jump out at me. Another read through for sentence editing and maybe reading it aloud to yourself, but otherwise, nice formatting. Annalies is an interesting character, from what I've seen so far. I want to see more x3 So please, pretty please, think about updating? I'd love to see how Annalies interacts with Arthur... Both lonely souls, from what's been built. Although, Annalies doesn't seem like the lonely type, as she wasn't very bothered by being alone this chapter...darnit. I want more of this story!

I can't wait to see how you wake him up~ XD

First of, love the screen name! Second, you are going to keep this going. I happen to love the manual fics and this one coaght my eye (again, the creen name) so can't wait for more!

Ah... please, update this? Please?

This is epic. Please write more.

Good Job

This story sounds interesting. I would really like to see where you are going to go with it. Is Arthur going to be the only unit to show up, or are you going to add others in as well? Hope you update soon.

cool cant wait to see what happens

Hmm, sounds interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Fuck yeah another manual story! /shot

So you got Iggy first, eh? Nice choice! But now...I'm wondering who's next. It could be anyone, from the other manuals that LolliDictator has wrote. Matthew, Alfred, Yao...anyone. XD

I really feel tempted to stop being lazy and resume working on mine. /lazy

woo hoo another one!::wigs out cutely::i totally colloct these things::grin::

you should have gotton yao frist any sane mom would pick that for it since it says "awesome baby sitter" in the maul itself.

pluse his cooking wont kill you.

wonder if ma will refund it for a yao unit once she tries the cooking?

it be like comeing home from school one day and ttheres no artie but a new crate and she'd be all"moooom wheres my englaaaand?" and she'd be all"oh sweetie i refunded him for a man who raised a few more kids and happy kids!"

then she'd head off to the bar to hang with her friends