Ever since you started writing this unusual pairing, I fell in love with it. Seriously, the way you write these two is so believable; you've clearly played/researched the 'Metal Gear' series :D!

This was a well-written and intriguing origin into how Zelda started to fall for Snake (well, be intrigued more likely) and how others view him. I can't wait to read other stories like these of yours :)!

So...that was really, really good. I loved it! And I'm one picky brat, let me tell you. Fantabulous job. Loved it. Engaging and thrilling and beautifully written.

Color me intrigued. Never seen this pairing before. It's also nice to not see Snake getting bashed.

What do you mean 'more to come' you labeled it as complete! !

Loved it. I already told you this before on the email/xat, but I meant it. This makes a really good insight and prequel to Fearless, indeed. Excellent writing too... you have a natural, flowing way with words that keeps the reader interested. Keep up with the awesome work Jamal!

P.S. And no, you've never bored me lol. I enjoy our discussions )

This is a nice story.

I don't have much to say, except that I'm intriuged into writing a Snake/Zelda fic.

Merry Christmas.