I knew that Artie would find a way to help the reporter! Nice!

So far I really like the story ist and Pierre is such a neat ideal! I am curious How it all will play out!

And this is why, this lovely story is on my favorites :)

Good story! I hope you continue to write some more stories.

Nice. I think it would have worked. It showed Artie's growing trust in Claudia. Thanks

You did a fantastic job with this. Fun to read. Even more fun to see Artie in the forefront of WH13 fic stories. Not enough of that, that's for sure.

BTW: I realize this story is over but if you ever want to to submit elsewhere and correct minor errors, know that Artie's last name is spelled Nielsen, not Nielson.

Aww, underneath the grouchy shell, Artie really is a sweetie at heart, I knew it!

This has been such a fun ride... don't know quite what I'm going to do with myself on Saturdays and Tuesdays now. I'm looking forward to discovering what artifact you send Pete and Myka to recover next!

Are you for realz, this story is over! So sad:( But what a great ending, "he has good Aura." that made me smile.

I heart this story so much and I heart you too for putting up with my shenanigans.

Write anther one soon please:D

aww.. this was cute, I heat these two:)

"...pursue me, or anyone around me again, I'll chase you down and take whatever creditability you had." That was my favorite line right thur, right thur! just saying:)

Very well thought out chapter, again when I read stuff like this I forget that this isn't strait out from the show:D

The -Way to start with a capital 't', I'm so very proud.

outer -Very descriptive, now I know it's not an inner one.

door -door? I don't think I'm familear with this

particular noun...huh? ;)

opened -way to add an 'ed' to make it past tense. you are

very good at this writing stuff.

up -humm... you would think it would open in (or out), not

up,unless it was a high tech spaceship. Curious why

we say 'up'...hummm

into -Good job making that one word, instead of 'in to.'

Artie's -Knock! Knock! Who's there? Artie. Artie Who? Artie's

Face!, see I can use that word too:D

office -Which one? The one with Steve Carell, or Ricky

Gervais?

at -You know what rhymes with 'at'? Cat...erpillar, no

wait, I think that's not right *confused*

the -Good, you didn't capitalize this one... you're so

smart.

Warehouse -You capitalize the Warehouse just like I do! Yeay!

Lets start a club with a secret hand shake and

everything:D

. -This punctuation is so totally correct, unless you

wanted to yell this information at your audience,

then it would be wrong, and you would need an

exclamation point:)

Okay... next line:D

No for realzies, this was great, Artie was so Artie and Pete was so Pete, and his rhyme was super!

(Crying) Why, why did you have to end this? Can't we possibly get another chapter or another dozen say? Cause I really enjoyed this, and I needed it considering how sick I've been the last couple of days. ANyway excellent chapter. I like how Artie managed to make this work out so well for him. I certainly hope we haven't seen the last of Crawford because I like the idea of Artie having someone he can turn to for info, or if he needed someone to get a story out.

Anyway excellent job I look forward to reading your next story.

InuGhost

Very good story. Liked that Artie got everyone to watch the news. Thanks

Nice wrap up. Looking forward to your next fic. :D

Nicely done. :D I think Artie would look cool with green streaks. :D