Heeheehee! I verily enjoyed this story. Thanks for uploading it!

This was great! I hope to see more with these two quite soon.

Most of the authors that write Reaver, do it from his perspective. I think what you've done here is almost more difficult. You not only kept him in character, but maintained the air of mysteriousness he seems to have throughout the game...er...games.

So, thank you for the simply delicious read! Doubtless, we will hear more from you soon!

oooooh... i liked that quite a lot.

I can only say that you did a magnificent job! You really did Reaver justice. The fight was exactly the way it should be. I can't wait to see you're next fic!

This is exactly how I pictured Reaver's personality to mostly be like. You've captured him perfectly in my opinion, and bravo for doing so ]

This was great! LOL, Reaver as always is perfect in this. You did a wonderful job at expressing all of his…eccentricities…and I love the more serious side of him that is conveyed. Also, the background story you give about him and Aurora was very interesting. Great job!

I totally understand where your Queen in coming from! How I wish there was a "choke into unconsciousness" expression for during Reaver's proposals. Big sigh. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I loved this story. Wonderfully written and I hope to see more like it! :)

That's a fine enough explanation of Sand Furies, and I -like- long. This story was wonderful, plain and simple. I could feel adrenaline pumping as I was reading it, and how cathartic it was! Reaver's suggestions are so preposterously awful one wonders if he is just trolling the whole kingdom; no one could possibly believe those are the best possible money-making ideas! I was proud of your Queen for standing up to him, for honoring her promises to Page. I don't know how many times I've found myself growling at my TV in utter frustration, "Reaver...what is WRONG with you?" (At least he's pretty...though that sort of makes it worse..)

At the same time, you captured his turns of phrase and mannerisms quite aptly, and evoked well his dangerous sexiness, emphasis on the dangerous. Even the Queen will be bruised for a while; Reaver leaves his mark on everything he touches.

I understand your story is complete, and that was a very appropriate place to end it; nevertheless, I would love to see more of your fresh, vibrant writing in the future!