Dumbledore really thinks Voldemort won’t kill kids? Did he forget that he tried to kill infant Harry? Snape gives him early warning and his plan was to surrender Hogwarts? Why not call in the Aurors and Order and trap the bad guys in the secret passages they’re using? They’re chokepoints were an outnumbered force can easily contain a superior force.

Sometimes in canon and AU I think the ‘leaders’ are severely deficient. One Marine battalion would gut the Wizarding world. Dumbledore etc., have no common sense, discipline, unit cohesion, or tactical acumen.

Draco kills a girl and Dumbledore let’s him off the hook. I’m sure his ‘mercy’ is appreciated by Millicent’s family.

So he conceals the Prophecy for 15 years so Voldemort doesn’t discover it, but now a Dumbledore spreads it around to a half dozen unshielded minds?

First of all, I loved and enjoyed your HP fanfictions. You put forth comments from Taskmaster. All that Taskmaster said was true. you have written other fanfictions with the same characters under a different plot, with different descriptions. Check your other stories and you'll see that all the comments spoken were true. You've changed the plots with the same characters from each fanfiction.
Thanks for your creativity.

Great story and cant wait for the wrap up. Well done.

Arg!
Sigh
Onward to the next installment
Still a great story, here's hoping that all will end well! ;)

Why don't those kids find ways to LOCK/WARD/TRAP their trunks? An open dorm room, open to all of the house, seems like a recipe for disaster! Huh...ans it was! I hope he gets it back!

Sirius gave Daphne a mirror to be able to talk to her family. Did he give Harry a new set since Umbridge shattered his?

Cliffhanger!

I almost liked the Greengrasses. I was so freaking close. This one broke me. I love this story, and will keep reading, but hate will boil inside every time they are mentioned. I understand they’re trying to help their Daughter, but this is just wrong. What’s worse: Daphne just watched and doesn’t do anything. It feels terrible, and I get the feeling they claim they understand, but don’t at all. Especially not the pressure on him. I mean, he broke up with her because his bets friend died! He was scared! Treating him like this doesn’t help anything, and will probably just scare him away from further intimacy, if this was real! And Astoria... she was waaaaay out of line. I just really fucking hate them now. It feels like the Father with the Shotgun thing, but this time... this time, it’s worse.

Still good to read and eager to read the end :)

Minor inconsistencies here and there, but that ending was well done. Gave me an Empire Strikes Back feeling. Going to dive straight into part 3!

Did you forget when Dumbledore took Harry to godrics hollow he told him about Ariana.

Awesome! Great story, thanks for sharing!

As much as I enjoy this story overall, it's obvious that there are a lot of minor inconsistencies. I only mention it because it's easy to spot, especially if the second volume is read directly after the first one. This is still a great fic, I just think it could benefit from a thorough proofread and some editing.