Creepy. But then how does Samuel have his soul? I think Crowely brought her back like that for shits and giggles. The "what for?" killed me. I can see Sam saying the same thing about Dean. Great story.

Thnx for the read!

Aw... sad.

This is really great writing. You had Crowley so in-character, I was astounded!

Great job :)

I couldn't believe Samual could actually claim that he's choosing family when he's basically screwing his grandsons over for his daughter! That one SHOCKED me beyond anything!

And even if his REAL daughter came back, I doubt she could ever forgive him for doing something like that.

Have to say, Samual's one of the greyest, most interesting character the show has produced.

And DUDE, I'm dying to know what happens next!

~ Tuppence ~

Oh man, I shouldn't feel bad for him because he totally deserves this, but ohhhhhh...

Great concept for a story. Nice.

What could have been...

I have no doubt you are going to ride the wave of your writing talent the whole way to the end of the contest. But I plan to hang ten as long as I can. :)

This was beautiful and heartbreaking. One of your best!