Great!

Huh... I didn't see that coming...

This chapter is more than a bit cruel. But you have me hooked, I gotta see how this ends.

Daxter/Tess is certainly a couple that is underrated and could use more attention :)

I really like this story, its gripping, the characters are great and I almost feel sad that I'm about half way through it already.

Despite it not quite being what I thought it would be, this has been one of the best Jak x Keira stories Ive read.

Wow. That's all I can really say. I mean, gah- I KNEW Keira was gonna end up fine because, come on, how could you do something like that to us? But it still got me when she died, and the grief and everyone's reactions, and Jak's frozen-ness. Ugh. I cried. Pretty hard. AND THEN SHE WAS FINE AND THEN I WAS REALLY HAPPY AGAIN! You're an amazing writer and you wrote the characters amazingly and I know in chapter 7 or something, you were worried about Daxter's sternness/seriousness was OOC, but I think it was PERFECT! Just, well done. All around. It was equal parts tragic and fluffy. I applaud you, friend. *bows*

Wow. Feud Ex Machina'd your way out of that bad ending eh? "Untimely death" pffft.
Doesn't say I'm not enjoying this! Definitely one for the archives!

This was an amazing story! I actually cried when Keira died and couldn't keep the grin off my face when she came back. The characters were well written and the ending was perfect. I also think you should write a one shot or omake of Jak getting his goggles back.

This is the best fanfiction I've ever read. I loved it good job.

This is possibly the BEST story I've EVER read. I'm such a sucker for JakXKeira fluff. I literally cried (which is VERY uncommon for me) when Keira died and Jak brought her back to the 'Ottsel. And was crying happy tears by the end. So, yeah this is my new favorite story now. And I stayed up until 1:34 to read it and write this review. But was it worth it? Heck yes!

That was... touching. Very. Aw man, sad to see it end. Thank you for taking my emotions and devouring them with this story. It really was something.

This was very good! You are a very talented writer!

Excellent story!

...This fanfic. Oh my god, this fanfic. I never seemed to repay you for reading my Jak & Daxter oneshot late last year, but I'll give as much praise as you need. You should be a publishing author if you aren't one already. This is amazing. And with 13 more chapters, I'm hooked. Can't wait to read the rest.

Wow great story! My second time reading it! Absoloutely fantastic! Love it! I think you should write a sequel! It would be very good believe me! :D

hihihi kiiiiissssss woah so sweeeeetttt god I love you hahahahaha aaa I missed Jak (and Keira) xD he's so great hihihi xD

omg I'm so glad I found this story...it's been so long since I last played Jak and Daxter, gosh I remember the first time I played it I almost fell in love with Jak xD you're story is brilliant, defenetily will read it through

I kinda missed this teenage-feeling :P