Nice story.

Ooohhh, a historical-based fic during the Napoleonic Wars! :D I don't see many of those. Who's the Hohenzollern person that was mentioned in this chapter and the first? I know that the Prussian royal family is of the House of Hohenzollern, but I somehow don't think that guy is the same (though I could easily be wrong).

This is excellent! One of the few well-worded, spell-checked and fully edited pieces of literature I've found here. This really adds to the effect your story has on the reader- we don't have to pause to get past spelling mistakes. The story flows in our mind.
Also, of the historical fanfictions I have read, yours is one of the best-researched. Your historical references are faithfully, clearly and understandably worded at the bottom of each chapter. I would rate this as a story other writers can use for historical references-when you use a historical fact, others may assume it to be true and thus use it in their stories as such.
I have but one negative comment, one that is easily solved. You have not finished the story! For the readers' sake, please complete your masterpiece.

i love historical-based hetalia stories! this is great! the war scenes are great as well and i'm glad you included the fight between Austria (as a nation) and the French soldiers (as men). it's stories like this that reminds us nation embodiments like Austria and Canada can be cold-blooded nasty in wars if they have to. great work.

I'm a sucker for these types of stories and I love the fact that we see a side of Austria authors usually don't show in fics, Lichtenstein as well. I don't think I've ever seen her actually fight before, so kudos to that. As for the story itself, its well written and you can feel the energy of the characters as you read; they truly come alive. Also, historical notes and referencesalways awesome.

Hey! Great job with this story - it held my attention from beginning to end, and I like how you incorporated the history into your writing. I think I've learned a good deal here :)

I also like your characterizations of Roderich and Lili. A lot of people depict them as being really soft, but I think they can be quite feisty when they have to be, and you've shown that really well.

There's just one technical thing I want to point out, if I may. In Chapters 2 and 3, you make reference to a bayonet as a firearm. Bayonets are not the guns themselves, but the knives you attach in front. It's just a technicality and not that big a deal, but I just wanted to point that out to you.

Otherwise, this looks great - keep it up!