That was fantastic. And especially her response at the end, wanting him (so sweet) and acromantula venom (hilarious with perfect comedic timing). Kudos on your lovely story.

LOVE IT! Its short but absolutely perfect. It leaves the muse feeling inspired to fill in the rest and that's a real gift so thank you! U rock!

Very cute, very sweet. :)

:) sweet. I like how u didn't include the seduction but it was implied that it was honest, and real, and mutual, and beautiful. Very lovely although the line mentioning puberty took away from the charm a bit for me.

lol..me like..:)

I love it :D :D

oh, I love it! :)

*Snickers* Classic. Loved it! Though what she wants Acromantula Venom for is anyone's guess... An aphrodisiac of some kind, perhaps? ;)

Great story!

Loved it!