Very sexy story. Great job!

This story had some very well written smut, and I enjoyed every last minute of it. ;) It's not easy to come by stories like these. Although the sex was unprotected, we'd like to see our two boys practicing safe sex with one another. From the wise words of Wes; "No Glove, No Gay Love!" Lol. I sincerely hope you continue this story or at least begin to work on one with chapters because I really like your writing style. Please continue!

Okay so this was amazing! :3 it was very well written and uber hot! xD! lol if you continue that would be awesome! :D i subscribed just in case x)))

SO HOT! And sweet! I really loved this!

P.s.: I think i've just got a boner... Which is kinda impossible considering that, you know, im a girl! LoL

That was some fantasticly written smut. I loved it. Except for one thing

CONDOMS!

Please, please, PLEASE! Next time you write in some smut, include condoms. I doesn't matter if they are both virgins (which btw, wasn't even discussed), safe sex is the only sex!

Sorry, but I spend much of my life handing out condoms at my uni, and you have no idea about some of the myths that go around. And unfortunantly, it's media/porn/literiture and fics like this, that quite often put these myths into peoples heads.

Sorry about this. Aside from my rant about condoms, this was very well written, and pretty hot too!

Cheers,

Suzie