screw you! then why it's open?

That was so funny!

This is actually really good! You have done great descriptions of the characters and the story line totally makes sense! Well done!

The short stories are great for getting the idea out there. :)

Nice. Percy acts very percy-ish and Hermione acts very Hermione-ish. I bet Hermione and Annabeth would get along very well.

Whoa...this was really good.

You need to write a follow-up where they all get together (Annabeth included) and discuss Greek mythology and magic and stuff. Then Hermione could have a 'Whoa, you mean she actually IS a daughter of Athena?!' moment, and it would be hilarious.
Also, if Percy and Annabeth are in college, they're probably, like, mid-twenties- ish, right? Why are they still bf/gf and not Man and Wife yet? Or at least engaged?
I've read this story, like 20 times, and I keep coming back.
Just thought I should tell you.
You rock!
-Randomness Incarnate

Nice, very nice.

Thanatos is death NOT Hades or Pluto.

Even if you don't have any means to continue, I think it's really good and I would love it if you changed your mind and continue writing it.

This was totally amazing.

Yeah. When I read it I thought: really? Thanatos giving things away like that for a bridge?

No offense, but since when was Percy so smart? Great Story!

Brilliant, Is there any chance of a sequel where Percy meets the others?

This most definitely make a good begining to a multi-chapter story. Good idea.