That can’t be it surely

Awesome

Please update

Story dead?

I love the story it's sooo amazing!

Awesome story! I love your writing style and the whole idea in general! It's soooo cool and amazing so pleaseeee continue writing this I really love it!

The romaji for Ace's last name ends with an s not a z. Sorry for being like this about spelling, spelling correctly is really important to me. Nice way to introduce the problem.

you used the wrong "brake," it's "Break."

"dum" is spelled "dumb"
Great story so far. However, I'm still having trouble with the style. I have a hard time reading stories without the correct format (periods/commas/grammar/etc) but I'm trying.

It's a good story but there are errors. "Disgust" is spelled like so. There needs to be commas and periods after conversation quotes. Example: "Great, Luffy's stupidity is contagious too," she groaned and pressed her ear back to the tree. "...so this is the sagga of "we've got no time to lose." In America, Periods and commas are always put inside quotes. Europe has periods and commas outside of quotes.

Every time I read this story I get sadder and sadder that it ends like this. While I wish that you had finished this fic I am also so in love with the story that 11 chapters feels like enough to tide me over for ever. I also love that you didn't make Nami and Hancock fight over Luffy and started laying the foundation for healthy female friendships which is so in character for Nami, because she's always gotten along with other girls so well and you've totally captured that while giving Hancock and her realistic tension. I'll love this story till I die, it's so well written and well characterized. Plus the way you write Luffy talking to Luffy is always so cute, if you don't pay attention that you totally get lost! 3

three years with baited breath, I hope this continues!

Please come back! This story is too amazing and unique to die!

Hi

Very nice story with Nami been with Luffy during Amazon Lily , noticing that Luffy in canon's remembering his hard time with Nami while being chasing by the amazon warriors !

A new Enies Lobby ?

Very interested and not an easy to write plot

Good Luck and best regards

Please make more chapters! Also, I don't mean to be offensive or harrassing you in any way but this doesn't seem to much like a fanfiction there isn't enough Nami and Luffy moments! But I seriously love this fanfiction please continue!️️️