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Er... New chapter maybe? This is really interesting... And, Er... Just, stops... still at the beginning... not even making it possible to imagine the what next...
So, update?

okay... this hasn't been updated in 2 years... I'll be keeping an eye out though... great job!

UPDATE. RIGHT. NOW. I WILL SEND MY MAGIC FLYING MONKEYS AFTER YOU.

AWESOME STORY!

KEEP UPDATING! :D ;D ;D ;D

Well your attempt at bringing us a chapter before the end of the year was a fail. But I hope you update soon for I really wish to see what happens next.

You know, I must agree with one of the reviewers, Beckett does seem to be lying about his memories. 'chuckles' Seeing as he has stated a good deal of info about Butler, Holly, and Juliet, I'm a bit suprised he hasn't mentioned anything about future Artemis.

Ah, another interesting chapter and a pleasant conversation between Holly and Artemis... Spiro's brother, the one that got his one of his fingers cut of and then reattached in book three? I'm right. I wonder what he wants with Beckett.. Oo update soon.

I liked seeing Butler help some of the others get out as well as Beckett, that was sweet. Not so sweet that a guy tried to shoot them on the way out, but hey, that's what villians are for. When you think about it we really hate them just for doing thier jobs. This from the girl who's favorite chracter on Heroes is Sylar. Has been since season one. Obviously I like villians. (just in case you don't watch Heroes Sylar is a serial killer.)

Hmmm...Spiro? Really? For him to be brought up, I'd think that he's very much involved. And, also, I'd think Beckett is lying about not remembering his goals. This could get quite interesting.

"i took her to an exorcist" LOL!

Pretty good. I still think you should put Mineveria (don't know how to spell her name) in it and make it a AF/MP fanfiction. Greatwork good luck

i love the plotline and this is one of my favourite fanfics!

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ update faster!

I don't know if you're improving rapidly, or if you just put more effort into this chapter, but I like it a lot more than the last. Adult Beckett is a bit...babbly, but that's just his personality, isn't it? I particularly liked the bear trap comment. I can only imagine what kind of things he could ask about, if it was the future.

Hmmm...this has been on my reading list for some time, and I am interested, I'll say that. Changelings, it sounds like. It may be some time to the next review, but I shall definitely be going on with the reading.

You should put Minavera (I don't know how to spell her name) in it. Say Butler rescued her from the restraunt.

*pats your back* Exams. Gotta hate them. Well, I completely understand.

...at least, the rational part of me. The cliffhanger-ed part of me is cursing exams with a lot of spirit, and I'd rather not say what it is exactly saying.

-.- Grrr. Cliffy. *strangles you* WHY?

Aaaanyway, love this. Keep it up.

~Bunnie