AH! They said his name!

Everything great about the Weasleys is what they can build together themselves. And it will be even better because it is them living it. Plus the Weasleys adore the two of them, they'd get over the heartbreak eventually and want them in their lives.

Well done on a curious what-if moment.

really beautiful. i loved this.

Love it! It's actually exactly how I've been angling my own story on their relationship, so I feel like I'm at least justified in believing that she can love both of them and it be something realistic and cannon like.

Keep writing!

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That was very sweet and endearing. As much as I am a HHR shipper, I love the friendship between the two of them. You portrayed it wonderfully.

Wow, you handled this very deftly. I loved the struggle in Hermione for Harry/Ron. The dialogue was great too :)

I'm glad I'm not the only one to notice the epic chemistry between Harry/Hermione. The movie was full of awkward moment: up to and including the Harry/Ginny kiss. God, I was cringing.

Haha I've always been a Harry/Hermione shipper, but I can admit Ron and Hermione have their comic factor ;o)

that was really cute :)

it was subtle and...done quite well

you should continue...even though it appears to be a one shot xD

loving the ambiguity here. By that I mean that the pairings are not set in stone.

Great story, there's no denying how cute Harry and Hermione were during the movie.
If you don't mind I would love to read your blog. I was already a big fan of your PLL fic.

Grtz!

I liked that. This was really good.

This was so lovely, touching and beautifully written

I was hoping that there would be a story about this scene & I'm very glad that I found one! Even though I'm a Harry/Ginny fan, I couldn't deny the chemistry between Harry and Hermione. & that kiss...WHOO! I wish you wouldn't make it a one-shot...please continue!

Nicely done. :) Some good funny parts too. Much enjoyed.

Aww this was really sweet. I liked the dancing and make out scene too. And the graveyard scene. Not to mention the growing old together remark. I've never really been a fan of Harry and Hermione together. I guess I always thought it was too predictable, her choosing The Chosen One. But those scenes! There was a great undercurrent and though I knew they wouldn't kiss, I wanted them too! I got my wish when Ron broke the Horcrux. Hahaha. I might have to see the movie again, just for those scenes. I hope they'll have some more in Part 2, but with Ron back, how could they? I've always sort of liked Ron, but I was disappointed when he came back, except for that hot make out scene, of course. But them leaving the line out about how he loves her like a sister encouraged me, somehow. I mean I like Harry and Ginny, but I was rooting for Harry and Hermione even though it is not canon. This is crazy, how much that bothers me. Maybe it was the chemistry between Daniel and Emma? Whatever it was, I wanted more. I hope they'll give it to me in Part 2. I think this is long enough. Got a bIt carried away. Sorry about that. Haha.

I REALLY like this! Please continue!