That was cute, the last two chapters had me grinning like a fool. I wish that they would put Rand into the AOS, but for now, I'll be content with your amazing characterization. Rand always struck me as the overly serious type, a perfectionist or sorts, so to see you make her that, and add a side to her we didn't really get to see in TOS is great. Keep up the good work and please, UPDATE soon.

LOL. That bit at the end with Spock was GREAT.

Well, I don't like seeing that this is complete-cause I'd really like to see more. But great job! You definitely managed to make Janice her own very interesting character.

Her interactions with Kirk were wonderful.

You did a good job with the Pavel/Janice pairing, too. Amusing, interesting, and fun to read.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

...And really, I would not be at all opposed to reading more-you know, if a plot bunny attack you in the middle of the night/day/etc. It's happened to me before! :-D

this is good! really, very good! so good! i'm not really using my vocabulary today, am i?

I especially loved it when he dropped her! Call me crazy, but I've always wanted to see that happen in real life!

Great job, as usual!

-Meg

I heart you, and I heart this story so much. Thank you! It's refreshing to have Rand revived and pairing her up with Pavel is awesome. Love a straight Pavel he's to cute to give away to the boys .

Well, piss on Kirk. It was a nice story, though. I enjoyed it. Unfortunately, what you've written about Rand will probably have nothing to do with the next movie. Did you see STIV? Who do you think the little blonde girl was supposed to represent? I have a feeling George Kirk had something to do with that plot, and since he was taken out in the reboot, that little blonde girl may have remained "undiscovered" in the next movie.

Simply adored it. you should continue. id love to see how the story progresses.

Annnnd...the word of the day is: Oops...

Insanity Signing OFF!

Funny thing about Memory Alpha, Kirk's age was the only one stated in the show. So how do they go about determining her age? One of the early novelizations have Rand and Uhura near the same age, but still not stated. Quite a few of the slash authors put her at six years older. LOL! The actresses were hired for their beauty and presentability, not age.

This was the best chapter yet! Checkov in any form, is adorable. I was enjoying it. And the end, made me laugh. Kirk's frown. Checkov dropping Rand flat. LOL! You made my day. I hope you continue. This is good!

I like it. And Kirk had better have a good reason for frowning considering how many times his character found ways to romance women on board.

lol! great chapter :) poor janice!

oh wow just wow awsome job i loved it poor Rand thou

I really enjoy this story you should keep it up.

Ah-ha! Well done. Nice ending. Nothing slurrpy. That is always my fear with K/R stories.

I think you've kept her true to character. Rand was professional and resourceful and looked out for Kirk.