Reviews for Unromantic
toeragssssss chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
LOl.

I enjoyed that even though it had Draco/Hermione a bit.
RinaBear8 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
I loved it. You hit the nail on the head. Everyone was in character to me. Great job.
Ignorance-Your New Best Friend chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Wow, that was amazingly unromantic but for some reason, I would have said yes... Alright, I'm kidding, I would have said yes at the first ask :D

I loved the ending none the less, great story :D
atlanicenigma chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I enjoyed this a lot! It was well written and both characters sounded like themselves, although Luna was a bit down-to-earth. I don't really like thinking about them after their school days, but if I had to choose, it would be written like this. Cute ending (:
carandae chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
The ending was just so perfect. I giggled and got a bit teary-eyed. But one part that really amused me (and it may not have been intentional) was that bit at the beginning:

" Ron often thought it was like kissing Ginny, and Hermione confessed after that she felt similarly. "

It makes it sound like Hermione is picturing kissing Ginny as well? Ha. Anyway, I loved this. I'm trying to get back into the HP FF world and this was definitely a great start. (:
Bella Elizabeth Malfoy chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
"Fancy getting married?" That's such a Ron thing to say, especially while watching TV (lol) so I think you did him justice. You know how much I hate Ron but I just saw Deathly Hallows and I love Rupert so I'll go easy on Ron this time hahaha.

Luna was pretty spot on too - turning him down after all those special efforts only to accept him at his most unromantic. She never did do things conventionally - that's why I love her!

Cute one-shot overall!
22Moons chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
I think you did a great job! I am a fan of Ron, and I think you got him just right. He's not the brightest guy, not the most romantic and definitely not the smoothest. But he keeps at it - imagine asking a woman to marry you that many times! In the end it's very romantic.

Luna is my favorite character, and she's more of a supporting character in this story, but I liked the way you wrote her too, and especially your description of why Ron loves her.

Nice story!