Cute. Love you analogies and perspective of a hormonal teenager.

hahaha this was so cute, I loved it

That sense of humor is legit standing ovation worthy.

Was that Rin in the cover pic?

Dear lord, Saro. I know you don't really use this account anymore, but I've needed to review this fic for a long time. It's cute and sexy and Contestshipping and uuuuuhhh I can't even.

You stuck to Drew's more fanon sexy player status, which is different from his anime awkwardness around his fangirls, but you made it work by showing that he's still undeniably attracted to May (has been for forever) and that he's not truly a player. Dear lord this characterization was such a good portrayal of what Drew might become after he's matured and gotten used to his celebrity status with girls. Hooooo boy I love it so much. May's characterization is also perfect: she's very similar but has started to mature past the point of letting Drew get to her. Honestly, her ability to resist his sexy makes me proud. I would certainly not be able to do it - your version of the grasshead would sweep me off my feet in about 2 seconds.

Basically, you managed to capture the canon dynamic between May and Drew while creating a piece that is remarkably sexy. I love it so much. Gaaaahhhh the feels, Saro. Thank you!

This is a pretty good read. I love tye fact that May had been her usual dense self throughtout a story and that Drew needed to use lots of teasing and taunts in order to get a rise from her. It's also cute that this event occurred a few years after they first met which means they clearly are old enough to start a serious relationship. I love how Drew was loyal and devoted when he finally found someone to devote to. His frequent roses for May is my greatest indicator for this and it forever will be my guiding light for shipping them. Anyways, congrats for the great story and keep up the good work! :D

Great job

You really nailed Drew here. Very flirty and playful, never going to mean-spirited.

Nice story :) good luckies with your future stories :)

Well sorry but read better

Amazing story

O/O 4:30AM in the morning 4 this

OH BOY Drew I think we're all distracted by your sexy let's face it

no honestly this is the best I love this story, pervy drew makes my life, settle down you little heartthrob wowie

OH I looked at the reviews to see if if already reviewed this and wtf "book critic" if you wanted to read a kid friendly story (ps this isn't a book pal) then why read a T rated romance story kthxbai #sorrynotsorry

BUT YEAH loved it keep doin what you're doin because its rad this story is rad you're rad woohoo xx

-zae

I liked this, it was amusing to read!

I liked this. Your manner of phrasing a few things were cute and really added to the story. I particularly liked the Wild Thornbush using Scratch Attack. Very clever. Also Drew's character was very realistic in that he was still kind of a dick and not too, uh, fluffy. It seemed more natural than a lot of little oneshots like this. Nice work.