Reviews for Mobius
Seth's Kiss chapter 1 . 4/30
Beautifully dark. I was both mesmerized and mortified. It felt SO real, the narration so smooth and so well done, amazingly so. You manage to paint a clear picture with very little said. Admirable X3

You, dear, are one of the best writers FFnet has to offer. True talent there, please never stop writing. I am so glad I stumbled upon your work. Thank you so, so much for writing and sharing this masterpiece with us.

Take care and be safe. And best of luck for any future projects you may have.

Seth's Kiss
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
I kind of love this, kinda wish I didn't...but I honestly do. There's just something about the power play being complete and Ciel drowning under the consequences of his choices, and Sebastian finally getting his due. :)
meezermom1999 chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Oh my soul. I am shaking. I thought this was before Ciel met Seb...
But the boots! The fucking boots, man - how fucking brilliant of you, Maiden! This AGAIN took my breath away. It was beyond creepy, more than frightening. Had to read it over a few times to make sure that I understood what was happening. Quite a slice of Christian Hell, methinks. BF wants dindin, and I'm huddled in corner hugging my cat. Wow. At the risk of sounding a bit BDSM - more please? Thank you for your hard work.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
ok. this is horrible and gorgoes. terrible and stunning and hunting. dear god, this is so beautiful and scary. it is a real sebastian x ciel. because this is how a demon is, cruel and mean. not the sweet version we usually like but the real thing. this is the real ending i am so damn scare to think about, because if sebastial somehow "likes/loves/desires" ciel it is how everything is gonna end. your history gimme goose skin, made me unconfortable, made me sad and read it 4th time before moving on. it is perfect in every single terrible way.
kokokichichi chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
As much as I absolutely adore your fanfics and admire them to no end, I have to say they are almost always dramatic and angsty. Not that that's bad, of course, but just an observation. Um if you do have the time, could you explain this a little deeper? I don't know why, but this fic confused me...
LilacSoul chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
So dark, yet so alluring. 333
Sunbattle chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
ooooh.! Interesting take!
antisaints chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK why are you so amazing. good lord this was intense! Your KS stories are fantastic.
Taiyoukai89 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Not gonna lie, I'm not usually in to the whole dark stuff, but I totally had to read this one again. You did a great job! I might have to go stalk around your other stories now, lol. - (Love the Sebestian human zoo thing, lol)
13996873894ht chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Frankly, this story was amazing. As are all other stories that I've read by you. It really gave a strong feeling with the writing. I originally thought this was set before Ciel contracted with Sebastian, but this was a really interesting twist (for me) and the dark, twisted concept really strikes me.
Keys2theKingdom chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
UGH. ANGST. 333

Ah, how the tables have turned...
Dark's Mistress chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I don't know if you purposely set out to make the reader think that it was about Ciel before he met Sebastian and made the deal, but that's what I thought as I read until doubts started creeping in as the ending drew nearer and I thought to myself, "Wasn't this about Ciel and Sebastian?"

It ended up being the boots that gave it away. xD

Well done! (in other words)
my name is paper YAH chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
my god! i love your work! it's so wonderfully dark and it flows so amazingly well! You have a wonderful talent. It gives me chills :)
Shimizu Hikaru chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Sooo~ Sebby has a whole human zoo huh? I love this story as well as your other works. They are just so perfect, flawless :3.

I love how you make it seem there's twisted love between them and I love it so much~! I'm looking forward to your next updates :D
Tristitia chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Oh, you are so cruel to the boy... but it with the style you write, everything seems not as cruel as it is. I bet it is hard to come up with all the horror stuff and intelligent titles you use. How long does it take to write something like that?... Is it tiring?... Your pieces are very readable and have caught me the first time I tried them. So I sincerely think that you have a talent to write no matter about what you write.
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