It has been quite sometime since I last check your stories, and it took me a day to catch up with them. A day spent well, if I may add.

Say, how would the odds stack up between a ProtoMech (a Hippogriff for example) and a mass-production MS (like a Windam)?

And how many percent of Mendel forces is made up of Star League-era Mechs? I would like to see more Shadowhawk and Black Knight action.

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hello lol
good chapter
i can't wait to see what allster corporation will do for be a mega corp
because i think i will read a lot of new research, developpment and after new tech created
but also because i can't wait to see what the allster megacorp will do when facing enterprise like the enterprise who are evils in the universe of robocop, deus ex or mass effect
but the more funny will be to see some earth universe like other gundam, halo or stargate see a ship like the superdreadnought coming from allster corporation and installing shop like the joker have done !
i really hope allster corp to go to some good universe like Babylon 5, startrek, starcraft, starwars, robotech, command & conquer tiberium...
it will be a good laugh and make a lot of people have a headmache moreaver if allster make some good products for civil and military sector with top gear and tech for her PMC
so good work and continue like that
i can't wait to read the sequel and find what the joker empire will become with allster corp
but what about orb and the people of the archangel, kira, lacus, cagalli or athrun ?
so write a lot, go wild and have fun
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sajuuk
ps : i like all your idea for allster corp but please add some research in energy shield like artemis for colony ship so to add some new protection with invisibility like geonosis II

Lavos, eh? I guess I can't be bricked if I say it certaintly fits a... World Revolution.

nice that fit bc so well.

keep up the good work.

That was one off the most epic speech i have ever read and also how awsome flay was for making the speech . keep up the awsome story telling

Lead, oil, blood, scream, and Sabaton - a recipe of fun indeed.

That oath of Variance really shows the national identity of its creator.

(If the choice of caliber isn't enough. .45ACP is an American cartridge, after all.

But wait, I suppose the Magi uses .45 Super?)

That first MS battle is great, as usual. But I had expected the Dominion to deploy less. You know, just need some to round them up, before raining fire with the Heavyarms.

Finally, 2 decades? You have earned moẻ than my respect.

And the rescue op is closed, it seems. Still, there's all that Extended mess to clean up, so the fat lady will sing again.

Then again, that's fully expected. And it's too late in the day for me to make any 'off the high horse' jokes on Kira. Even if he just got a rather harsh reminder that the world is shades of grey.

... goddamned book ruined the impact that line used to have.

I just started reading your collection of stories and I only have one real question. Why did you downgrade Gundam Heavyarms? I'm pretty sure it has a beam gattling gun instead of a normal battling. From the anime, it was suppose to be the only one with a reactor strong enough to fire the Buster Rifle multiple times. Other than that, its a good story.

Better!
The part with the EOStech, not my style, but I like it! But where did you learn it? You shoot?
But isn't a Mk.23 a bit too much. I imagine Kira to be a P2000 or SIG Sauer type.
Oh, and put him in something more aggressive. I always want to see him in a F91 Twin VBSR type or Silhouette Gundam. If because of different platform, then a Testament with Impulse's packs.
And I expect a really, really big slap to his face next chapter. In term of Gundam protagonist, he falls too far behind Amuro Ray.

Oh dear god. She's gathering her own minions!
Just kidding.
To be honest. I was expecting the beat-down by orbital bombardment, but Calamira taunting him like that was just the icing on the cake. And the Russain proves just how dangerous he can be. I know a couple of guys like him, and they are MEAN when they chose to be.
And nice job on the two chapters in a row.

Yo Stravag, long time no review from me, huh? Sorry, I just usually read on my phone, and writing a long review on phone is a pain.

So, why would Djibril think that Mendel would want an old strategic bomber base? As far as I know, Mendel doesn't have anything that would need a long highway to take-off.

You have a point, Kira just isn't that special as a "Ultimate" Coordinator. he's not the next stage of genetic engineering, he's just a fancier Coordinator. Hell, he isn't even the only one with SEED, which used to be his unique gimmick.

I love the Flay/kira interaction. It's like having your stalker, who was obsessed with you and wouldn't leave you alone, come back five year laters and has managed to be more successful than you, has a better marriage to a more impressive person than you, and looks at least three times better than they did previously. Poor Kira has no idea what to do with his life, now that he isn't the center of Flay's. I'm probably overdoing it, but it's still funny.

Yeah, I always knew that Blue Cosmos/Logos was going to be part of Ragnarok, but I'm rather curious how they go from being kicked off of their planet to huge-ass mobile doll swarm.
You know, I bet they hated coordinators so much, that they decided to go with an insanely powerful AI instead. Even it it doesn't rebel and kill its creators, it could coordinate MD forces rather well.

…Hold up, I can't really remember if you included those gundanium bullets (or something) from the MD attack in the original Jokers Wild. I mean, you've revised/rewritten your stuff a few times, so I'm not sure if its currently included in your current canon timeline.
…or was it phase shift bullets? huh…

So, Flay's future company will have, at the very least, an Extended division.
There's a thought. can the extended process be applied to coordinators, or even other genetically enhanced people?

So, any idea when you are going to update your Sigma story? I love the world-building and dungeon crawling aspects of that story.
Have a good weekend.

Woo, psionic trolling is the best trolling. I could hear that troll song as the BGM in my mind as Djibril rants against Mendel for doing his sheep like it was in Cardiff.

Sent it through.

Its FraserMage damnit, not FraiserMage.

As for Scandinavia? Swedish are basically pioneers in the field in reality with AIP systems... to the point where the US Navy paid the Swedish to operate one of their Subs out of the US for awhile so they could practice against a start of the art SSK... and it apparently sunk US carriers in exercises. Hell, the Japanese AIP system... is just two Swedish Gotland-class SSK's AIP system, bolted into the same sub.