Wow, you got Lockhart so in-character! I loved it :D Great come-back chapter, and a great little insight into why Snape could have agreed to have that duel with Lockhart :) Brilliant :)

"Sev-O." HAHAHAHA. "I was hesitant to ask any of the witches. You know the rather incapacitating effect I have on them, I'm sure, and I'd certainly hate to embarrass anyone." This guy is unbelieveable! Unfortunately for humanity, he is perfectly in character here xD

Update as soon as possible :D

RXP

Loved this one. Great idea to put Lockhart in here, and I liked the last sentence especially :)

First of all, where did you find Dumbledore and how did you get him to write that letter? xD That was SO perfect! Like straight-out-of-a-HP-book-perfect!

I love how you write Sev's little mean streak... he's so honest i gotta love him :) but he manages to be JUST nice enough, for Lily :) great title btw.

Update soon!

RXP

Oh Sev... first impressions much? jeez.

Judging by his facial expressions, that's EXACTLY what he was thinking xD right down to a T. Great work!

RXP

*sniffle, snuff, wipes nose*

Aaahhhhwwww Snapey... D: the poor guy. no wonder he's grumpy :'( i loved this little insight into the Prince :)

RXP

Ahhh I forgot to review the last chapter, which was great! This one is very good too...I like the way Petunia was upset over Lily's Hogwarts invitation, and I thought the letter was very true to Dumbledore's character.

Great chapter! I loved Dumbledore's letter; his personality comes through as incredibly kind and understanding, which I feel is accurate to the books.

Aw, that was sad! I don't like Petunia, but I did feel sorry for her. Very well written, once again! :D

Oh, I like :) I thought it was nice to see that scene through Snape's eyes, and I liked it much better than it was through Harry's :P

Fantastic chapter! Snape is incredibly in character. I hope you don't mind my reviewing every chapter you write, just tell me if it bothers you... Really looking forward to the next update!

It's funny to see the sorting ceremony from snape's POV. How 2 people could experience the same event and come to 2 completely different conclusions (Harry/pain and Snape/Harry's "arrogence"). You are doing really well so far. Keep up the good work.

Aw, that was terribly sad but really good at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

You just broke my heart! That was sooo sad...I look forward to updates!

Hey amela !

i LOVED your story...I'm french but i'm still pretty good in english (i think..still learning..) sooooooo...well i thought your story was amazing :) i really loved it ! (btw sorry if i do not explain myself very clearly, like i said, i'm still learning..)Oh ! And You know what? ...that might seem a little weird...but i actally LOVED the ending..(well the rest too !) But the endingwas specially shocking..''I am Severus Prince Snape. This is my first memory.''

I thought it was soooo sad and i can't imagine living with family like that...anyways GOOD JOB :D

Amélia.