| Reviews for Lady Darkness: A Slytherin's Legacy |
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Harry-Potter-Addict-595 chapter 4 . 1/27/2018 please continue |
ShadowAngel100 chapter 2 . 6/22/2017 The twins should be dark. Have HGDM together by 4th year? And I think Ginny should be a daughter to a close follower of the Dard Lord rather than his daughter |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/7/2017 The letters write themselves, then McGonnagel Signs them. Its a theory that would make sense in the movie. Don't worry, I've read the books. Please keep going with this story! Try to get it done by the 24 of March, 2017. (I dunno, deadlines just help me organize my time.) Please do this! Its great! I love you, fanfiction author! |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/7/2017 Harry and Hermione should turn on Ron. Luna and Ginny should meet in the train their first time at Hogwarts. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/7/2017 1. Don't make Ginny a riddle. Please. She is interesting enough. Just make her and Luna friends. You're a great writer. 2. If you keep voldemort dead, hermione acting like him is going to be ten times more interesting. Its great, either way. year. Draco should call Hermione a mudblood (I know she's a pureblood, but it makes it a bigger insult) hence getting punched by her. Tada! is screwed. So is Cormac McLaggen. Neville is just a pathetic pureblood. should be neutral, Sirius should be good, but Lupin, oh Lupin is gonna be the best of them all. He's gonna be the spy. He's gonna hit everyone where it hurts most, and after that, rub salt in it and do it again |
roni.not.gonna.die chapter 2 . 3/4/2017 1. ginny should not be a riddle it would be better if she stayed who she is a Weasely. , Voldie should come back at the hands of Hermione. 3. they should start as friends and slowly start to like each other like somewhere around 4th or 5th year. 4. bash potter and weasel. 5. it would be cool to have the twins be dark like ginny. 6. you could switch between the 3 girls since they have been the main point so far, but mainly Hermione since it is about her in the brief review. |
Anonymous chapter 4 . 8/17/2016 Please write more! Its very good! |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/8/2015 Please update soon |
Nivellia Neil chapter 4 . 4/19/2015 I like it. |
Lotus1417 chapter 3 . 6/1/2014 Please, please make the twins dark! Or at least not light! They ae just far too much fun! L |
Lotus1417 chapter 2 . 6/1/2014 Bash Ron and Molly please! I think 3rd person pov is a good idea. Thanks! L |
Claudie chapter 4 . 2/22/2013 Okay, I've read Lady of Darkness, and I loved the plotline, so I've read this re-write, and I have to say, It's possibly my favorite. I love the fact that you construct the reason as to why she hates muggles and mudbloods, such as Ginny. She seems more ruthless in this one and I love it, as well as Luna, who isn't that vocal about her dislike. I'm glad you're doing Hogwart Years, I want Hermione to start talking to Draco earlier on, hopefully. Also, Could you please not make them die, that broke my heart in Lady of Darkness. Anyways, AHHH I just love this fic so much already. Update soon, you have my unwavering support! |
Lorna Potter chapter 4 . 11/16/2012 Plz update soon! |
dark nightmere chapter 3 . 7/28/2012 I think hermione should steal the stone in first year while helping her father. I still think harry should stop him but hermione should take the stone as harry is knocked out by the evil spirt. I think in second year ginny should come into this and help hermione fight harry and her family who she should hate with all her might expeat for fred and george who she will slowly try to bring over to the dark side. I think they should go around with the basalisk petrafeing most of the mudbloods and maybe kill one or two. I think in third year you should still have lavender in this story because she is one of the sister but unlike your last story there should be four sister who will be the ladies of darkness. I think that when lavender finely joins hermione and ginny sometime in mid third year she should have been corrpted by her own hatred of muggles who hurt her in school and want revange agenist all of them. Now luna should join up with hermione and ginny in fouth year. You may ask way wait this long will this will have silldvated her own hatred of muggles and mudbloods and help her to tear her enemies apart. In fouth year hermione, ginny and lavender should help voldemort to come back and try and kill harry off. I think luna should join them nearing the second task releaing that harry is not wouth saving. I think ginny should be a riddle but it should be discoved in fifth year. I think that hermione and draco should come together in third year while ginny and blaise should come together in fifth after she learns she is a riddle. Now lavender could be with samuas like you did in your last story but I would rather she was with somone from slythrin. I think should also get together with theo sometime in fifth year as well and the four should come together in that year as well. |
twerkaholic chapter 4 . 6/25/2012 Wow! This is really good! Keep up the amazing work! IT's really cool! I love all the girlos! GINNY AND LUNA AND HERMIONE! THIS IS A really rally good story. not just good, but amazing! UPDATE! |