Reviews for Diving
tunarolls chapter 1 . 5/22
You really like your ellipses, huh?
mumphie chapter 16 . 3/10
I enjoyed your story and am sad I came so late to the party that I couldn't add my two cents in to plead for you to continue! I'm sure that real life : school, job, family, or a sneaky muse got in the way. Someday, I hope your muse tickles your mind again and you come back. Thanks for this start!
:)
poseidon17 chapter 16 . 2/6/2019
noooo why did this have to end so soon :(
Smutley Do-Wrong chapter 16 . 12/3/2018
Harry character served with big undercurrent of inferiority complex Harry(reasonable for a non Macladden non Draco teen), in contrast(or counterbalance?) to the rather outwardly suave debonair Harry character.

But then my ironic guide, is fanfiction Harry characters, are the exception, of being more a SOP choice, to stray at least SOME toward OOC boundary, for building interesting fanfiction, while other characters pushed into OOC directions, generally are not a good choice or/& poorly executed.

Interesting incomplete read.
At least hung at funny moment than on a cliff hanger.

Unless restarted, 'Thief of Hogwarts', was one I recall as the most 'could be complete' finale feel final chapter, as fic fell into extreme hiatus time period.
The Delightful Beast chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
Aye yo. This story is amazing! Has a certain charm to it that others don't. Judging from the recent reviews "a few" people want this updated lol. If you ever get the chance please at least finish it. I know that may be asking much but this story deserves it. Stay steezy
Renaissance567892 chapter 1 . 3/22/2018
Great story, will be waiting for updates
La Belle Coeur chapter 16 . 3/19/2018
Hey ! How r u?
Please consider continuing this. This was the very first fanfiction I read way back in 2011. It's been 7 years.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/2/2017
I first read this story 5 years ago and it still remains one of my favorite Harry/Fleur fics. Your characterization of the characters is refreshing and original. I hope one day you will continue the story and look forward to reading your words in the future.
proton104 chapter 16 . 7/17/2017
Please continue the story.
Stormwing3670 chapter 4 . 1/30/2017
I like the way you make the characters interact with eachother. I also would like to see other characters POV, maybe Ginny, Neville or Ron next?
ApparentIce chapter 16 . 3/25/2016
Love your writing style...the conversations between Fleur and Harry are fun!...hope that you someday continue with this great story...
Guest chapter 16 . 2/21/2016
cool characters. could you please continue this story? we rarely see such good chemistry between them. a very enjoyable read.
MostWantedN7 chapter 16 . 2/14/2016
I've had this story in my favorites for quite some time. Something compelled me to check the favorites list and then I reread it today. This is a good story with its own pace, the characters are superb. I like it because your Harry isn't a brooding fourteen year old kid, and Fleur isn't a cold seventeen year old(well at least once you get to know her). I truly wish to see a new chapter, this story deserves it. Hopefully you'll be able to give us something soon.
soccerlover74 chapter 16 . 12/17/2015
I really enjoyed read your story, hope you continue writing.
DukeBrymin chapter 15 . 12/8/2015
I'be been very much enjoying this-the writing is very well done and your characterization is wonderful. I will say, however, that I think your Harry is really about 16 or 17, rather than 14. Which isn't really a problem.
Any chance of the story's being finished?
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