As I said earlier, I love how protective Paladin is towards Spencer. It's sweet and makes me smile.

Also, I love how you've decided to write this story through the Point of View of an OC (well for now, I'm still wondering if he is from another show, something tells me is). The fact that you've written this story through the first person Point of View, caused us to see the BAU team through the eyes of someone who isn't a part of the team in any way shape or form. Also, I tend to like things written in the first person because I feel as if I'm in the story with the person (God that either sounded weird or crazy... oh well!)

I wanna learn more about Paladin! Where does he work? What is his team like? What is his real name? Does Spencer know of these things? How does he look like? (I REALLY hope I didn't miss this, I would be embarrassed if I did) In my head, I picture a guy who's a little bit shorter than Reid, dark short hair, or maybe chin length but dark... Like dark brown. I also see him as slightly built, but not to Derek's size. I see him with green eyes or hazel. Maybe a bit tanned (probably Latin or Middle Eastern, I'm still juggling with possibilities). Sorry, I think way too much when it comes to stories. Especially if I don't have a vivid description of a character.

Also I just looked up the meaning of the word Paladin and it's just gotten me more and more interested in this story. I can't wait for more! :D

Glad this guy is good to Spencer.

Oh, no! Spencer's attack wasn't random.

please conti... soon... thank you for write this story

Ooh, this is getting very good, hard to see how Reid reacts to his team when he is in a relationship that is not with one of them, very interesting take...

Yay another epic chapter !

Can't wait for more :D

Continue!

This is really interesting.

Hi Deamon,

This story is really getting good. I noticed it after the title caught my attention and after reading the first chapter, got hooked by it.

This reminds me of one of those great mystery stories, like Sherlock Holmes.

Its quite interesting how Paladin steps around Morgan's questions and only gives him enough information about himself to keep the questions at bay, but nothing more than that.

Definetly looking forward to the next chapter,

This Gordon guy seems like a nice guy. I look forward to more.

Wowo amazing chapter !

Love this, must have more.

That was really good !

I am shocked that no one has reviewed this yet. This story is brilliant! I'm usually very hesitant to read any fic where Reid is gay. Usually because the ones I have read were pretty out of character. However I find your fic to be REALLY interesting!

I like Paladin, tbough I can't help but wonder if he's from another show universe or something. Either way, I think he's awesome and I LOVE how protective he is of Spencer.

I can't wait for more. :) keep up the great work!