this is so beautifully written. I hope you continue writing!

This is the best first-person story I've ever read. Never before did I read every single sentence of a story with that much anticipation of what comes next. Fantastic job!

such a wonderful piece. I loved it.

just enough fight and resistance to make it that much more intense when he realises that he has already lost. XD

I adore this pairing.

Great Job.

You have a very interesting way of writing this story. I liked it (:

Holy moly oh my lorddd.

Hottest piece of LOVEMAKING? SEX? I've ever read in my entire life.

I am virgin, and I love to read sex scenes. All I can say is that, when I decide to make love/have sex, I want it to be just like you had written. Mind-boggling, mind-blown and satisfying.

afheowhfwa. Please don't feel disturbed by my comment. XD I MEAN IT IN A VERY GOOD WAY!

- NoaShi

Holy friggin' crap. The way you wrote this was different from any other story I've read on this site; it caught my attention immediately and held it for the entire story. Quite frankly, you could have written something about watching paint dry and it wouldn't have mattered-I still would've been hooked. Good writing!

Omg, I am blown away! You are an amazing writer, you had me on my toes the entire time, eager for the next sentence. One of the coolest and most interesting things I have ever read on here.

I like it alot! _

Absolutely breathtaking.

So incredibly sexy

I love your writing style, it's really unique, captivating.

Mmm. Erotic and beautiful. Surprised this doesn't have more reviews. Instant favorite.

that was so BEAUTIFUL and SEXY! XD

you made them both seem so passionate and... OMG!

that was amazing!

i love the way you write, it is just so moving and powerful.

very nice, excellent job! :)

good way to end it (;

really enjoyed the story!

Absolutely gorgeous, just like Kakashi. I love how you got inside his mind, and showed the battle on so many levels. Wonderful!

Sexy. Beautiful. Lived up to the promise of the first chapter. One of the best lemons I've ever read. Nice work!

-Fans self- whew, that was hot.

The POV play sort of gets me and normally I'm not one to condone first person, but I liked it here. The 'you' thing normally KILLS me and I hate it but again, I like it in this instance.

It's choppy, gritty, and definitely what sex is like, unlike what most tend to write where it's all sunshine and rainbows and then they curl up together and fall asleep (which, by the way, is a super bad idea after sex, what with all the bacteria and ... bleck, I won't go on).

All in all, I really liked it and I hope to see you writing more.

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