please don't leave this beauty, I love it. update soon

Updare soon please

I really love this story, but if you don’t want to write it I’d feel bad making you

I can see why you were unhappy to how the story was progressing, but at the same time could understand (if my suspicions were right).

But of course, never feel forced to write! It looks like there are a lot of people who are interested to see how it progresses, maybe to post the storyline? :o

I guess my suspicion was that Naruto was pregnant at some point, hence why Naruto told Kakashi she didn't need any protection and losing her child affected her so much. Adding onto Sasuke... then Kiba... that can add up to affecting someone a lot.

Please please please continue this story it's super lovely and i really really love it!

I honestly think that this is a great fanfiction with high potentials. I genuinely think that the development of Naruto is quite unique, though she may be a bit ooc, I really wish you do continue to write the story, many fanfictions I read is just Naruto with the same personally as in the manga/anime so this definitely makes the story more thrilling with a different personality Naruto. I would love to see the journey she undergoes to recognize her feelings and emotions, so making her rather full of mood swings is something I actually enjoy. But overall I hope you can continue with the story, I seriously enjoyed it :)

I love this fanfic, I really do! But what I'm getting from Naruto, other than the fact that she's a kind and caring surrogate mother for Momo, Ryushiro, and Kaira, is that she's a bitter, overbearing, self-righteous, hypocritical whore. Nothing's wrong with that. We all have our moments. Just that... this Naruto, the bitter slut, is really starting to annoy me. What annoys most about her is that she WANTS Sasuke and Sakura to get back together as if she controls their life when it's obvious that Sasuke and Sakura themselves don't want that. And she really easy willing to listen to WHY they broke up in the first place. That shit annoys me! The way she acts like a self-righteous know-it-all leaves a bitter taste in my mouth. What sane person would want a woman who have beaten her kids so badly that she LITERALLY blinded one of them to get back with her kids?! Naruto is a fucking crazy, spiteful, overbearing, controlling, slutty whore. The way she tries to control someone's marriage... It's just... It really fucking annoys me!

So? Naruto is a cheating slut? Why? Because she was dating Kiba behind Gaara's back. She didn't even breakup with him before going off to another man. It makes Naruto kind of hypocrite, going off on Sasuke about being unfaithful and manipulative when she's doing the EXACT same thing. Just saying.

my point wont help but good job

I love it I have read it three times

Good story

errr wait. so naruto still in relationship w/ gaara when she accept kiba's confession? i'm sorry but, the hell? i never deemed naruto as that kind of girl. it's really ooc of her to rebound to kiba and maybe gaara for the pains she have from sasuke. i'm not saying letting go is bad, but considering naruto's personality and his strong loyalty, the way she change from one man to another kinda ruining the story. from the way i saw it, the most steady and healthy relationship she have is w/ itachi. true that they label it as platonic, but it's not uncommon for platonic love as the base of relationship, and she kinda crossed the line when naruto kissed itachi tho. actually i start to support itachi more than the rest of male casts. and despite their claim, both of them act more like lovers/married couple than siblings/close friends.

Aw~ dangit! I really like your story and hope ya continue it! If not godd luck on your way!

Hello! This is such a lovely story and I think a lot of your readers are really really reaaaaally looking forward to its continuation and ending. It's been almost four years but I personally hope that you will find time to continue this lovely creation of yours. Honestly, the OOC didn't bother me at all because if it's needed to have the story developed into it better version, so be it. I am actually looking forward to Sasuke and Naruto's reconciliation and hopefully, end up with their marriage and probably, an additional member in the Uchiha's family from their union. Pretty please, do not abandon this wonderful story. Only YOU can finish this one. Looking forward to your updates. Good luck!

Damn too bad we never found out what the inexcusable action was. Was she hinting at a baby between her and Sasuke? Oh well, the world may never know. I enjoyed the story while it lasted, and it is a true pity that it won't be continued.