Reviews for The Bet
Guest chapter 14 . 6/15/2018
This was the cutest and funniest Rangiku and Toushiro story I've read! It was awesome! I would love to read stories of some of the other captains and lieutenants, like Bakyuya and Renji (especially them) switching positions! Once again this story was awesome!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/14/2016
love it~ gorgeous as always
JemDragons chapter 7 . 12/23/2015
You know, it's bad when fictional characters make ME stressed about THEIR money problems - I have enough of that on my hands as it is.
NicoleBL chapter 14 . 5/17/2015
Gosh you have no idea how I LOVED THIS! Haha waah I laughed too much this seriously made my day xD I love that you ended it with a tie, it would be too bad for either of them to lose the bet, also I could see the experiment made them bond a lil more than they are, and there's also a kind of a character development for both of them, but I think mainly Toushiro, esp after the speech Rangiku gave him about him not knowing his men and not making friends, I really love that part! Oh and I think Rangiku calling Toushiro with his givin name sounded weird at first but, it's really just adorable! She really shouldn't call him 'captain' all the time. I need to find more fics about the two, they're just perfect partners haha! Not Romantic, just like what it is in this fic, friendship with both acting motherly sometimes towards each other xD Man, it's really wondrous how a silly bet ended up with great results lol! Well done with this fic, I loved it from all my hreart :D
whitealmond chapter 3 . 1/2/2015
This is all hilarious XD I love how you characterized Haineko rofl
Guest chapter 11 . 9/18/2014
No offense, this chapter was amazing but the battle was very OOC because Zaraki is unharmable and their is no way Rangiku would have been able to cut him. Or block out his immense reiatsu for that matter.
horrorfans18 chapter 14 . 8/8/2014
Love it this story! :D Both characters were my favourite and seeing how good their relationship is makes me feel happy and giddy. :D thank you, thank you!
forever122 chapter 14 . 7/15/2014
Very nice job on this story. It was very funny and greatly enjoyed it. Now to see what other stories you have.
forever122 chapter 13 . 7/15/2014
What peoples' minds can think of...
forever122 chapter 12 . 7/15/2014
Oh Rangiku... Just love swhen she berated him. You DO NOT give alcohol to a minor, Ran!
forever122 chapter 11 . 7/14/2014
You did pretty good this chapter. I thought Kenpachi and Yamamoto were both well in I am proud of Rangiku. She did good today. Yawn... Well, I'll finish reading later. Gotta go to sleep. Night night!
forever122 chapter 10 . 7/14/2014
Heehee... He fell over and FINALLY called Matsumoto captain, albeit she wasn't there to hear it... You did Kenpachi perfectly. I feel real bad for Toshiro.
forever122 chapter 9 . 7/14/2014
He sucks his thumb!? Hahahahaha... I can just see him curled up with her. So kawai! Oh Matsumoto... They are like a family, just not in that way exactly... I loved when she patronized him! She DID learn from the best.
forever122 chapter 8 . 7/14/2014
Heehee... Loved when Ran picked him up. XD I love it when people do that to him. I always love when they have a mother/son relationship. Double fav.
forever122 chapter 7 . 7/14/2014
DUN DUN DUN!
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