I don’t think I’ve been read a story like this and I probably won’t again this is amazing

I have read your Sen per finish series several times. Have you thought of finished your series? I find your writing style quite excellent. Although the ending of mass 3 sucked can you please finish the series and cover mass 3

Great story. I wish you would have finished the story though. I know it's been years but I feel that it deserves to be completed. Are you going to do the fourth installment about me3?

I can't wait to read the rest! This story is very exciting!

Please man! Update! It been like, over 2 years!

... Kevin and the mom!? Hope she doesn't embarrass him.

Why the Jamaican mon? Why!? If I find out Talon dies I'm done!

please update soon :)

Read all the stories in this series and loved it, is there goin to be any more?

I like this story. Any more chapters coming soon?

your story is good, really good, but you treat cerberus like complete retards, instead of the scheming masterminds they are. for example, the orders the illusive man gave miranda, the way she carried it out, giving the location of cerberus HQ out to those that would kill them, and, to show the galaxy that cerberus means business, they attack the goddamn flotilla.

Lets out this in perspective here. cerberus is a small, but extremely well funded and intelligent organisation. So they, in all their wisdom, decided to send ships to destroy roughly 50 000 ships, al of which comprise the flotilla. And apparently, cerberus has twice the number of ships as the quarians. So you are saying, that the largest fleet in the galaxy (the quarian's flotilla) is outnumbered 2-1 by a small private organisation? really? this is actually worse then i realised when i first started to write this review.

And even after cerberus wasted however many ships they did, they still had enough for a fleet to defend themselves. and sacrifice in a pointless last stand.

apart from your awful portrayal of cerberus, very little irritates me about this fic. Your spelling and punctuation is decent, and i like the characters, though i thought there wasn't much point in adopting jack, but oh well, not a major thing, at least, not yet.

I did think it was silly that he invited the quarians back to anchor, and when Eric said he would stock and repair the quarian ships, he didn't mention once anything about payment. Also, Eric allowed the alliance back to anchor (or so it seems), which was very silly, as now they know where he and the shadow army are, there base of operations, how many ships were in system, defences, inhabited planets etc, etc. as i said, they might not have allowed the alliance to follow, i might have read it wrong.

one last thing, when you have eric say "traverse", do you mean the Attican traverse? if so, is that all he is fighting to protect, not the whole universe? because it seems to be that way.

Oh, and here is the mass effect wiki on the flotilla incase you disbelieve me

(space) wiki/Migrant_Fleet

Im sorry man but not only is this story epic, it's also dead

Just finished reading this series and it is quite a decent read :) Just one thing that jumped out and had the flags jumping out the Migrant fleet, is composed of 50.000 ships holding a total of 17 million quarians, in your engament with the Cerberus fleet you lost 5 ships which sudenly became 1/5 of their people which did not make much sense :d

Anyways hopefully you have not given up on the story so!

Till next time!

-Sep

good work

Awesome start to the final section. :)