Nooooooooo! Keep continuing! You are really good and this is a very good fanfic! Please continue because this is a fantastic fanfic and you ARE an AWESOME writer!

i hope you do update soon :) can't wait to see how the story will progress. i hope Luffy will react to all of this.

Aww that Belial is such a basta-! D:

I admit Zoro hugging seemed off, but how you written didn't seem OOC at all. (Bet the ZoNa fans were happy. o; )

Awesome chapter and last time I checked it's longer than the previous. Which makes me one happy duck :D Eeer, or dragon...

Keep 'em coming!

keep writing :) i think zoro is a bit too desperate at the end- but besides that, nice plot progression :)

I hope he doesent go and kill his nakama.

Nice chapter!

My word, this is awesome. You seriously had me going from start to end, please, I'm begging you to update soon XD

But seriously, awesome job on this chapter, my fav by far~

VERY INTERESTING GOOD STORY

Oh wow, I'm loving this story already. And my favourite bit, No Pairings! 8D

Sorry, But I kinda got sick of pairings and Romance around fanfic, it seems so OOC DX

Concluding that, This is quite an interesting story, and love to see how it turns out.

Oh, wow. Where did you get that idea? I like it.

So you're just writing what passes through your mind? Is that it? Then you will edit it and change some few stuffs and bla bla bla...? ... Sounds like me. X9 I have a plot, but it's not detailed. I usually write the details based on what passes through my mind. Sorry. -_-

Let's just hope your idea will bring to an amazing story, shall we? Try and learn to just flow with your story. :) No, I do not recommend it, I'm just giving some silly (and probably wrong)advice to just write what pops in your mind.

Anyway, I like the idea. So please update!

Please update this story! Its great, very original. Can't wait til the next chappie.

Til then, Terror out! X3

hmm, this should be interesting

update soon )

This story has actually got my attention, The Prologue really mysterious so you did good with that, The only thing that needed improving was the amount, but you already explained why it was short. Other than that, you did a good job for your first. Can't wait for the next chapter~