Aww, that was so cute, long as hell, but cute. You seriously could have made this into multiple chapters, but I'm not complaining. This story made me feel good with all the fluff, "I love you." 's, and random sex scenes
And I your writing with this couple. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I love it.

Alright, so I liked the story.

But, I'm gonna give you some ways to make it better :3

I'm a grammar nazi, but alas, mine isn't the best. Through out your story, there is one thing that irked me.

When having a person talk, you should capitalize the first word of what they say. That's, like, one of the only things that bugged me.

There is a few more things though, such as the way you have Reid wrote. I understand that he was prego, but to put it simple, he was kinda a cry baby bitch. I know Reid isn't perticuarly a manly person, but he didn't act that way at all.

Also your use of commas. You over used it greatly.

Alright, so that's it. I hope I didn't come of as a sick, bitch, jerk, ect. If I did, I honestly didn't want to.

Other then that, I really liked your story. I've only ever read anime mpreg stories, but I must say, this was amazing :3

A very lovely piece...

Best MxR fanfic I've ever read (: There were a lot of 'I love you's though. Apart from that it was absolutely amazing, thank you (: 3

My gawd this was gorgeous. It made me laugh/cry/smile like a dumbass. Just beautiful...

sweet

loved it amazing they are so cute together

So cute, you captured all the many emotions that pregnancy brings...

I loved it! So cute! love how they came up with the name. Do continue to write stories about the 7 if them, cant wait to hear more about their 5 kiddies!

OH I love Reid mpreg stories. This was sweet. I love how you laid out their daily lives out so well. The pregnancy was very well written. Loved his mood swings, and super sweet Derek. The drama and romance was adorable. Loved it all. I'm so HAPPY you wrote this -. Thanks for sharing!