This was so sad :c But a good story!

Wow, I think you wrote Mori really well! No wonder he's so protective of Hunny. It makes perfect sense since there was that time in the anime where Hunny got lost at the beach and he pretty much freaked out. XD Well, great job!

Dx poor mori! i figured since he was talking about not showing emotion and when she was gonna swim that she would drown Dx poor mori...

This is so sad! I cried! This is beautifully written and described. Takashi was perfectly in character, along with Hunny, and Takashi's friendship with Maki was perfect. Thinking of how that one time Takashi wasn't there to be with Maki and she died, it must of really hurt Takashi everyday to look into Mitsukuni's eyes and know that if he was to leave Mitsukuni alone, the same thing may happen to him. Beautiful. Truly Beautiful. I can't wait to read more from you.

Your a really talented writer. This story was sweet (but not in that sugary, over-stuffed bun-bun lovey sweetness way, more like a sweetness that shows the love of two friends that will never forget one another?...)

I think Maki really added to the story and helped you explain your thoughts on why Mori is so protective, and you explained it very well.

In truth...I loved it. It made me cry, and I haven't cried for a fanfic in a long time. So good job :)

I hope you keep up the good work.

~aerie-art

That is so sweet sad but sweet mori has a good heart :)

AW! So sad, but so cute!

I'm too lazy to log in. Sad but sweet story. I really liked it. Great one shot. I usually don't like one shots, but this one was really good. I had a feeling she would drown when she said she was going swimming.

Awww this is soooooooo sweet! And sad, but mostly sweet!

Love this!

Poor old Mori :( That was so sad that she died like that, but I liked how it all fit together with how protective he is of Hunny.

A bit lacking in some places; I think if you developed the intimate parts of their friendship some more and maybe had a few thoughts on Hunny before she died it would have been more effective.

But I still liked it :D Good work~

~Mimi x

dude that is soo sad i think im going to cry...or just tear up but still its so sad:'(