nice

Aww...so cute! I can only imagine how that made Hotch feel. Very nice writing, very nice getting into the mind of a kid.

Awww.

Awwww. Very nice.

That was so cute and touching!

Nice idea to see things from wee Jack's point of view, good job and soooo sweet. I could watch entire episodes of just these two. :)

Cute story. I like that we get into Jack's head and see why he think his dad is a real superhero.

Well done, thanks for sharing your story.

Absolutely beautiful.

I love all the scenes where Jack has been, that little boy is really sweet and that last scene almost made me cry.

That was so friggin sweet! I loved it, although I do have one thing to say: You forgot Dave *sad face* I love Dave... Lol! That was amazing! I loved it!

Aw crap. stories are not supposed to be that darn touching, but cripes, this is awesome and touching and yet not sappy or saccharine.

Great job. You rock!

(As an aside, was there anyone in the world who didn't know what was going to happen after Jack said he didn't want to be Spider-Man last epi?... :))

Great story. Especially the ending when Jack decided to dress up as his daddy for Halloween because, as Jack told himself, his friends superheroes were all make-believe, but he had a real superhero in his daddy.