Tears of an Angel is by RyanDan

I don't care if its OOC I still cried...during class which was awkward but I don't care. I'm allowed to have my Alex dying yassen ness...probably should do my Maths now

*sobbing*
You make me wanna cry a lot now ;;;A;;;
Yes, Yassen crying is a bit OOC, but I think for somewhat assassin that never seen a 14 year old schoolboy-turned-into-spy agent... it's ok. I mean, deep down in Yassen's heart, I think he cares about Alex, bcs he's John's son.
(Sorry if this sentence confusing you, I'm not English... I'm Indonesian).

Keep writing. *click Favorite Story button*

"Genuine love is expressed by genuine commitment." #JustQuotes

The death seemed to be so horribly vivid and still like Alex suffered- even though in the end, it wasn't the sand that got to him. This realistic fanfic makes me feel so many things. Not anger... maybe frustration at how sad Alex's life ended and how he could've done so much more. Good one-shot, overall.

This is DA BOMB! VERY good story, i give you such high praises for writing such a sad but good story(i almost cried myself, but the stupid tears won't come out!),

Actually, i don't think it's very OC of Yassen to cry for Alex, i think it was right of you to write that, after all, Alex does deserve some fallen tears from such a close but far away person,

I did some research and i found out that 'Tears of an Angel' is sand by Ryan Dan, look for in you tube!

I give you my HUGE thanks for writing such and awesome story, i bet this would be a best-seller if it was ever published! It was right of you to write this story, i've always wanted to see the sensible or vulnerable side of him, EVERYONE has a weakness, and it just seems right of Yassen to cry for Alex... BEST STORY EVERRR!

Oh, and good job on ur story 'Once Bitten, Twice the Spy'(wow, i can't believe i remembered that title)

Another good song that would go with this story might be 'Bring Me to Life' by Evanescence

I wish you the best, i hope you're able to update soon on all of your stories, i'm gonna try an be with you all the way,

~Your fellow follower and reader(and most crazed fan, yet) -CHiKa- })i({

Sorry for the long review,

ஜஜ~CHiKa~ஜஜ

What emotions did this make you feel? (apart from angry, annoyed, etc) amazed by the quality, sad that it seemed as realsitic as it could get for alex's death

wow... sad. thats for sure. loved it though, every word. i think yassen crying is occ, but i still think that it is fitting for this story.

Wow that was super intense. And really sad. You made me cry! But that's a good thing... In a way. It means you can make people feel strong emotions by writing. Anyways great job. I have to go find a tissue *sniff*

saaaaad...but good

Fabulous, but I can't take the thought of Alex dying, so I'm going to pretend it didn't happen.

Oh, and I REALLY hope it's Yassen too! Fingers crossed for Y/A but I highly doubt it.

Loved this. started crying myself.

Oh. Wow. Yep, that's all I have to say.

Interesting take on the upcoming book ;)

AH did not say that a villian would come back, but someone you could call an "old friend" would return as a villian. I guess that could qualify Yassen because he is a character that fans have been begging to be brought back. The only other "old friend" that could also turn into a villian that comes to mind are the boys from Point Blanc, or Paul Drevin from Arc Angel...

This is a great start to your fanfic. Def continue!

intense, sad, emotional, in one word amazing!

that's a deathfic for my liking :D I totally hope a scene like that will be in the book!

your writing is really fantastic!

keep up the good work!

Loved it! 3

-Toodles