Ahahah, Snape's insane! I love Lupin, dying Lockhart's hair orange...:)

Ahahahahh! Worse than Voldemort! Ahahahahah. So true. He's so damn sneaky!

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list.

Jan

Now that was interesting. Would have liked more Lee commenting, he says such funny thing. But that was good.

Wow... I read this for the first time last summer, and it left me with the same emotions as now. This was amazing. You captured Snape's pain and shame wonderfully. The Death Eater in Snape is the part of him that fascinates me the most, and you've handled it well. Good job.

Aww.. I really liked this tory. It was a little bit uncanon but still good. I really liked the way Snape gave Harry the snitch and how Snape realized that he was a Slytherin willing to go after his goals, no matter who gets hurt was superb. Great job!

Wow. That was really good! It's a new idea with it's own history in itself. I love it!

I LOVED IT! GREAT STORY! I added it to my favorites list!

YEEEEEESSSSSSSSS! I love it! Poor Snape. And poor Harry too. I think it's good that Snape realized the similarities between himself and Harry, especially with him being the Heir of Akel Dama, here. It's so cool Snape caught the snitch and gave it to Harry. He ain't called The Miracle Maker for nothin'! But he refused to do something like he had before, refused to 'go after what he wanted no matter who got hurt'. The end of chapter 7, both chapters 7 and 8, really, were so sad. What a life to have to live. And what a way to lose one of the only things that make you happy. Now we know why he had a refeere licence in book one. Quidditch is one of the only things that make him happy at all. That and his adopted (?) daughter. Indeed, 'He's not that bad.'

It's a hundred and fifty points, duh!

keep writting that was good

Hey! What's Lucius doing there? :p I want more...I want more...! :D

I love it, I just love it! Please write more soon, this is just perfect! I love Snape's dark sense of humor. And romance, too! Plus, Snape riding a broom with a quidditch outfit. What else could a girl want?

love,

coesius

ok those scenes in chapter 4 were wierd, but otherwise this is a totally cool story. i love snape! keep updating

Yes! So glad to see this story appear again. I had been wondering what happened to it.

Lovely twist of events, Snape going up against Potter. Let the games begin, indeed! One would almost think Lucius Malfoy arranged for that to happen.

Curious about the "Come on ... not you too" remark from Snape. I think his memories of a past game tie in here, eh?

Minor quibbles: Who's Alex? And how come in Chapter 4 the teachers were winning 30-10 and then at the bottom of the chapter, Snape notes that it's 70-20 students?