I really fucking enjoyed this, the way Naraku dominated sesshomaru and Sesshomaru just took it and gave in to the pleasure xD it was super cute how they said I love you, to each other in the end. Ahdbxosb please write more one shots of these two!

How in the name of ... HOW DO YOU ONLY HAVE 9 REVIEWS ?! I'm seeing things ... I'm sure of it ... That was only of the best I've seen in a while . No ... TOP 5 BEST on FF . You did great . I bet lots of people read it and enjoyed but didn't review . Bastards .
BWR

I never really liked first person accounts of sex scenes and that still stands even after reading this fic, but I did like the idea that it was based on.

Ps. How can sesshomaru ride naraku if he is on the bottom? I never read where he was on top.

Naww
That was so cute .
If you ever feel like it, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a story about their lives in middle school and high school!

That was really good!

I love it was sooooooo cute!

Oh My Fuckin' Gosh! I totally loved thhis lemon. I was like, nnnnn, maybe it'll be good, but not all that good because I've read a lot of bad Yaoi lemons, but when I read this, I was like, ShitFuck! This is so Fuckin' AMAZING! I loved it. It was great. You just made this pairing my favorite yaoi parings. Which is surprising because I love Sesshomaru so much and I didn't think Naraku attractive at all. But now, I kinda like him. This is one Yaoi lemon I'll be reading over and over and over and over again. Such an amzingly awsome yaoi. Love it. Greatest of all time. You know how you only come across an amazingly awsome story of a certain genre that has all the things you wished every story had? This is that yaoi lemon. The best EVER! Nothing can beat. I guarantee that...I just realized how long this review was. Sorry for making you read all this. I was just typing away, running off at the mouth again. I usually talk A LOt so, again sorry. Way too much stuff. It was just an amazing yaoi lemon. I wanna thank you for writing it and then shut the fuck up (You know if I was sayin this, you'd say the same thing to me). So, I'm gonna shut the fuck up and go now. Bye, and great yaoi. XP

Best naraku and sesshoumaru story ever!

WOAHH! This one-shot is awesome! :)

M, that was so hot!

I loved it!

This is certainly something different but very good. Great story/Lemon, I hope to see some more work from you soon!