Don't know how I never read this one before but I loved it. How wonderfully them.

This...was (and is) an absolutely stunning piece of writing. My favorite part...

"You can't dwell on if you were right or if you were wrong."

I had a night very similar to Ziva's in this. Tonight. So, this (as odd as this may seem...) somewhat helped me see the light. You have some definite talent. Thank you for posting it.

I really like this story. Ziva has changed from a Mossad officer into a NCIS probationary agent; she can think and plan for the future. Great story! Now only if I could find my muse..

I can hear every word coming from Tony's and Ziva's mouths as clearly as if they were speaking right in front of me. This is phenomenal.

I love it, really! It kind of goes along with this song I always listen to, Ali in the Jungle. As for muses, well, mines been missing for a while, so if you see it, just airmail it to me, will yah?

Great One Shot! I loved it

That was SUCH a good piece. I loved the ending and how they embrace. It was really, really moving. The way you wrote about Ziva's worries about her past and how it would affect her relationship with Tony was so beautiful. LOVED IT.

i really liked this story!

i like stories that have a lot of dialouge, really good and catchy dialogue to be specific. this story had a great flow to it :)

this was AWESOME! It had the perfect light amount of wonderful cuteness to uplift oneself from the expertly crafted angst that this story was fraught with. I LOVE IT.

Good story. I could see this happening.

I really like this. I know what you mean about the elusive muse. Mine is quite fickle as well. Can we perhaps go muse fishing and see what we can catch?

Brava for a great short piece, true to both of them. I look forward to more.

"But I know you. I know who you are, Ziva. I know who you are and what you've done since. And I can tell you this: Those guys? Rivkin and whoever the hell else? They didn't love you. Me? I love you."- made me cry

"No buts. It's past tense. Gone. People change and we move on. You can't dwell on if you were right or if you were wrong."- points for rhyming

LOVE IT BEYOND BELIEF.

thats a good one ;) the 2 of them can figure it out together and learn as they go ;) thanks for the good read

Oh I adored this! So lovely :)

Hope your block gets squished soon :) I love reading your stories

Thanks for another great one!

Love love love love love this! It's great! Really good writing :)