| Reviews for Divination |
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whirlingskirts chapter 1 . 7/4/2018 "I think, when it comes to Commander Spock, my fate was sealed a long time ago." Your stories are to lovely! I feel so happy after reading them. |
Mrs.Bones23 chapter 1 . 1/20/2012 First writer on that has brought a tear to my eye with their stories. Absolutly fabulous! :D |
Ringhuiniele chapter 1 . 12/19/2010 I remember playing a similar game to this when I was in grade school. Lolz. We were camping and I was with several friends. I never dared looked into the mirror tho. Being in the woods just didn't suit me. This was a nice pre-academy days story of Nyota. I liked this line a lot, "They were eyes as deep and lonely as space, full of starlight and searching." When you wrote it the second time, I had goosebumps. I wonder given Vulcan's superior hearing, I think he heard that. :D Thanks for sharing. |
librawriter chapter 1 . 10/30/2010 One of the best I've read. I like the use of divination and the way you described the entire scene with Nyota when she saw Spock. This was brilliant. I would love to see a sequel! |
BlackDove13 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010 I really enjoyed that! It was a fresh, fun concept; and well for the Halloween treat. :D |
VickyFromGreece chapter 1 . 10/26/2010 I am not familiar with Halloween but I like the game. The best part for me: "But it was his eyes that held her. They were deep and lonely as space, full of starlight and searching; searching as if looking just for her." Maybe she was searching for him but he also was searching for her! Lovely story! |
KristinaLeigh chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 This was lots of fun! |
Milarca chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Oh my god that was simply amazing :D I think Nyota's vision if Spock in the mirror with the stars will stay a while in my head. It's just so perfect. And at the end, when she realizes its him and everything ends like it should... sigh. So nice. And such a wonderful, haunting Halloween story _ |
pezzyaltoid chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Wonderful Halloween tale, Linstock. A pleasure, as always. -isobel |
NotesfromaClassroom chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 "Sandy was an immovable object and it was impossible to argue with her. It was usually best to agree and then influence subtly as needed." I can totally believe Nyota would have this skill! |